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Post by Pixel Profligate Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:12 pm

Welcome to the Pixel Art Assistance Thread

This thread is intended to be where anyone and everyone can post a small number of sprites to get feedback on what to improve.

It is heavily suggested to keep the number of sprites you post in one go small as to help make it easier on people who want to help.
When giving suggestions, please keep it respectful.

Otherwise, have fun making sprites and getting better!
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Post by Gangar4999 Sun Dec 25, 2016 6:28 pm

yeah so i post work that i want people to get feedback her.
i have something but i'm still working on it.
so look out for it.
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Post by Gangar4999 Sun Dec 25, 2016 7:33 pm

Ar
done.
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what do i need to improve and your thoughts.
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Post by Professor Morel Mon Dec 26, 2016 3:53 pm

Gangar4999

Your right image, the spectre. You've got most of the outline down and the piece itself is delightful, in the spooky sense. Here's what I thought you could do to improve on the image.
Right Image, Spectre:

Next up, the left image. I feel like I should know who this is, provided it isn't an original character. Perhaps it just carries that animé or protagonist look. Je ne sais pas. But let's get into my recommendations.
Left Image, Radical Fellow:

Hopefully, at least some of this is helpful. Bonne chance!
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Post by Gangar4999 Thu Dec 29, 2016 8:02 am

those red bits at the bottom are teeth as the cloak is alive hens the eyes and thanks for the tips.
and the one on the right isn't a skeletal but i can see why you thought that was the case. Smile
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Post by Gangar4999 Thu Dec 29, 2016 11:27 am

i hope this is a improvement
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Post by Professor Morel Thu Dec 29, 2016 6:44 pm

There appears to be a revamp of the previous shading, though it is mostly disguised by the robe's inlaid scratchy design (at least it looks like a design, rather than shading from my perspective) but that's not a bad thing.

I still say the shoulders need re-editing for my previously posted reasons. However, there is marked improvement. I don't particularly find anything to be wrong with this now. Some fine work, indeed!
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Post by Gangar4999 Thu Dec 29, 2016 7:10 pm

Professor Morel wrote:There appears to be a revamp of the previous shading, though it is mostly disguised by the robe's inlaid scratchy design (at least it looks like a design, rather than shading from my perspective) but that's not a bad thing.

I still say the shoulders need re-editing for my previously posted reasons. However, there is marked improvement. I don't particularly find anything to be wrong with this now. Some fine work, indeed!

i tried to make the cloak look like it could move around like its could be a live and it is.
Thanks for your time.
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Post by Gangar4999 Sat Feb 25, 2017 6:16 pm

this is the base of what i have in mined but i would like some impute on what to add, colour scheme and over floras it has in its concept fays.
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plz focus on the design and changes i can do, an example is changing the neck or making the head bigger/ longer.
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Post by Professor Morel Sun Feb 26, 2017 6:18 pm

I'm not particularly experienced in any form of mechanical design, but I attempted a quick color scheme for possible inspiration (merci for giving me an excuse to color~).
Idea:

Personally, I would find some fashion of energy wings to be interesting along with a variety of hull damage: scrapes, craters, etc.
As for ideas on what might be edited in terms of the design, I concur that the head is much too small compared to the body but that's the gist of it. As a concept design, its quite interesting though perhaps a tad large. Unless you plan for heavy detailing, I would almost recommend downsizing but such is a trivial concern.

P.S. Personally, I like the tail and neck's form and see no cause for changing it.
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Post by Gangar4999 Sun Feb 26, 2017 6:20 pm

its a interesting.
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Post by Gangar4999 Sun Feb 26, 2017 6:52 pm

hairs some colour schemes that i got from some friends.
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Post by Gangar4999 Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:45 pm

ive been testing the head crest of the dragon.
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Post by Pixel Profligate Mon Feb 27, 2017 6:18 pm

I'd say go with the second style, since it looks far more like an ax or a weapon of that shape would.
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Post by Gangar4999 Tue Feb 28, 2017 3:49 pm

thanks for you opinion LlamaMiniste Smile .

this is what i got at the moment from the input.
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Post by Gangar4999 Fri Mar 03, 2017 11:36 am

update
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Post by Gangar4999 Fri Apr 07, 2017 2:45 pm

Update
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Post by binisfox Sat Apr 15, 2017 5:16 am

what should I improve
what should I improve

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Post by Gangar4999 Tue Apr 18, 2017 2:48 pm

update
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what do you think of the shading. i know that not finish.
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Post by Gangar4999 Sat May 13, 2017 4:24 pm

another update (sorry for my absence)
i'm testing out what to have for a background.
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Post by Zephyrblaze456 Mon May 22, 2017 8:05 pm

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Here's some of my own sprites including my SL avatar (i know theyre kinda small but upscaling them kinda messes them up. so... ya)
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Post by Zephyrblaze456 Mon May 22, 2017 8:22 pm

Pixel Art Feedback/Assistance Thread Capture2_zpsh81i5xbp ignore my last post
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Post by Gangar4999 Fri May 26, 2017 7:11 pm

Zephyrblaze456 wrote:Pixel Art Feedback/Assistance Thread Untitled_zps3mnvjaek

1. if you what us to ignore i why can't you delete the posts.

2. for the first on the out line is inconsistent (but good colour skim)
3. (the middle) is interesting but the same problems apply.
4. (the last one) has the same problem.

you have a interesting group of sprites. i do see promise but you need improvement.
I hope this helps.




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Post by Zephyrblaze456 Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:58 pm

@Gangar4999 The reason why the first two were like that is because i was having a bit of trouble getting them to show up on here, as you can tell. So that's why i put "Ignore my last post" on there. Also, the edit/delete post button wasn't there when i went to delete the first two posts. And, thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. The third sprite is (for those who can't tell) my version of Remoceus from the Colosseum LP. I tried to add Arceus's ring but that just looked ridiculous so just slapped on one of the spike thingies from it as a little crown and called it a day after recoloring the main body.
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