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My First Sprite Ever

Post by Explotar the Typlosion on Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:29 pm

Hi this is my sprite do u like it? If there are any things that i can do to improve it then reply



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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:44 pm

For a first sprite, this is pretty solid. The colors work well together, and, even though it is mostly just a fusion of Blue and that one Elite Four member from Gen 4 that I didn't care for that much, the additions you made are pretty good. I do, however, have some gripes with this sprite. For one, the grey color would have benefited from more than two shades. Maybe a darker grey should be added to eliminate the jarring black outline on all the grey parts. And the dark brown for the outline on the pants should definitely be darker. I also assume the red line on the face is suppost to be a scar, but it just looks like a cut, not a scar. For scars, just use a darker skin tone color, and it works miles better. If it's just suppost to be an open cut, then I guess it works, but not 100%. I don't really know what I find off about it if it's suppost to be a cut, but something about it just seems off. Also, on the OWs, the cut is on the wrong side of the face on the side poses. Other than those, it's a pretty solid first sprite. Well done, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by CrimsonIgnis on Sun Aug 02, 2015 8:17 pm

You took the torso part of the jacket from one of my sprites didnt you

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Aug 02, 2015 8:20 pm

CrimsonIgnis wrote:You took the torso part of the jacket from one of my sprites didnt you
I think it is, and that's the case, shame. I have nothing to say to those who steal besides shame.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by Yria/Mara LB on Mon Aug 03, 2015 4:40 am

Minus that you probally stole Ignis's torso. (What we dont like.)

The pants are huge, I suggest making them a little less wide and... bulky.

Also if you did stole Ignis's torso, You'd need to make one by yourself. Stealing work from somebody else is not exactly tollerated here + it is just kinda lame...

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by Zell on Mon Aug 03, 2015 5:21 am

Oh my god , I see the Crimson's jacket !

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by BetaX on Mon Aug 03, 2015 9:16 am

Nah, You just stole his Jacket from the future and came back to the present and claimed it, Crimson. ;P

But in all seriousness, He just probably using your jacket and editing it without asking.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Aug 03, 2015 9:18 am

The problem is is that it's the exact same, and since he's using it without permission, he stole it.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by BetaX on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:02 am

LlamaMinister wrote:The problem is is that it's the exact same, and since he's using it without permission, he stole it.
It is, but like I said, It was edited.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:05 am

Not really. Crim compared them, and they are almost identical. It's still stealing even if it's slightly edited.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by Zenox-rmp on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:16 am

If I would take your bike without permission and without you knowing it, I change the tires of the bike and I give it a new colour, is it stealing?

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:17 am

Yes.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by Zenox-rmp on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:29 am

I was actually talking to Beta, but you're right.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:31 am

Ah.

Lesson of the day: Quote things so we know who questions are directed to.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by BetaX on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:32 am

LlamaMinister wrote:Not really. Crim compared them, and they are almost identical. It's still stealing even if it's slightly edited.
I'm kinda disagreeing, but that's in my taste.
BTW I'm not defending him from all this.
(You kinda are... BetaX)
(Shut up, Beta!)
(You know, Zeno and Llama are right.)
(SHUT UP, BETA!!!)
(Just say that he needs to improve his trainer sprite)
(You know what Beta, I'm going to ask him if he's okay for me to edit his trainer sprite.)
(Go for it, BetaX)
(THEN I WILL!!!)

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:35 am

BetaX wrote:I'm kinda disagreeing, but that's in my taste.
BTW I'm not defending him from all this.
Well, you're disagreeing with a fact. It was literally proven to be the exact same. And it really does sound like you are defending it.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by Zenox-rmp on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:38 am

Just do it! Nothing is impossible.
Ask him, Beta.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by BetaX on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:41 am

LlamaMinister wrote:
BetaX wrote:I'm kinda disagreeing, but that's in my taste.
BTW I'm not defending him from all this.
Well, you're disagreeing with a fact. It was literally proven to be the exact same. And it really does sound like you are defending it.
BetaX wrote:I'm kinda disagreeing, but that's in my taste.
BTW I'm not defending him from all this.
(You kinda are... BetaX)
(Shut up, Beta!)
(You know, Zeno and Llama are right.)
(SHUT UP, BETA!!!)
(Just say that he needs to improve his trainer sprite)
(You know what Beta, I'm going to ask him if he's okay for me to edit his trainer sprite.)
(Go for it, BetaX)
(THEN I WILL!!!)
I edit it before you said anything.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by BetaX on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:43 am

Zenox-rmp wrote:Just do it! Nothing is impossible.
Ask him, Beta.
I'm Not Doing it. BetaX will.

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Re: My First Sprite Ever

Post by BetaX on Mon Aug 03, 2015 10:45 am

Explotar the Typlosion wrote:Hi this is my sprite do u like it? If there are any things that i can do to improve it then reply

   
 
BTW Explotar, Is it okay for me to edit it your sprites?

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