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Updated LM Mugshot

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Jun 15, 2015 12:25 am


So, here is my mugshot for my new sprite. I hate this mugshot, but whatever.
As per the usual, please critique. It really helps me out.

UPDATE: I poofed the scarf more, remodeled the end of the hair, and fixed the thumb line thing. I was gonna try to fix the face lighting, but that position of lighting is consistent in all the official mugshots, so I just left it as is.


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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by Zell on Mon Jun 15, 2015 3:43 am

I...I can't find... can't find any...Errors. Perfect !

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by Kitten on Mon Jun 15, 2015 11:22 am

I love the detail in the scarf *u* Although I have a few things that bug me. The ends on the hair are flat instead of tapering like normal hair. I know it's supposed to be a bowl cut of some sort, but making the ends curve into each other more would make the ends look less square. Also the scarf on the trainer sprite has more volume while the scarf on the mugshot fits more closely to the body. The line between the thumb and the hand shouldn't extend that long. It should only go about halfway. And it looks like to me the the light source on the face is on the right while the light source on the body is on the left. But other than that it's a pretty nice mugshot and it has a lot of personality.

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Jun 15, 2015 11:26 am

Well, thanks Zell. I really appreciate it, especially since I'm not good at mugshots.

Yeah, I agree. I only spent about 2 hours making this, and I was as tired as a person can get, so I knew flaws were in it, I just couldn't see them passed the tired. I'll try fixing it up today or tomorrow if I have time.

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Jun 15, 2015 12:39 pm

Well, I fixed it today instead of tomorrow.

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by Zenox-rmp on Mon Jun 15, 2015 12:40 pm

Maybe you fixed it tomorrow but you used your time travel powers to post it today.

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Jun 15, 2015 12:42 pm

That is a possibility, but you will never know, will you?

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by Zenox-rmp on Mon Jun 15, 2015 12:48 pm

I know more than you think.

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by Kitten on Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:33 pm

Yay it looks a lot better now ^u^

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:34 pm

KittenCutie1 wrote:Yay it looks a lot better now ^u^
Thanks ^-^

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by Kitten on Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:39 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:
KittenCutie1 wrote:Yay it looks a lot better now ^u^
Thanks ^-^

Still need to fix the shading tho xD

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Re: Updated LM Mugshot

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:41 pm

I'll try xD I'm just trying to keep it consistent with the official mugshots is all.

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