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LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Sat May 28, 2016 11:40 pm



Well, I tried to make a mugshot for me, so...yay? I don't know.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by CrimsonIgnis on Sat May 28, 2016 11:46 pm

Nice mugshot but alas I have two issues with it. That being the arm looks kinda short and the back of the collar could use some shading. Other than that it's a pretty good mugshot. Nicely done.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun May 29, 2016 1:37 am


Tried to fix those two things. How's this?

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by CrimsonIgnis on Sun May 29, 2016 1:44 am

The collar is better but the upper arm still looks a bit short

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by FutureCreator on Sun May 29, 2016 4:43 am

I feel like the jaw should be a bit wider, the way it is now it kinda looks like a girl. That may just be me, though.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun May 29, 2016 11:03 am

I kinda see what your saying, but I will say, the head shape was "borrowed from" (in other words, it is) Archer's head, so I don't think it's the head. I'll mess with it and see what I can do.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by FutureCreator on Sun May 29, 2016 11:40 am

LlamaMinister wrote:the head shape was "borrowed from" (in other words, it is) Archer's head
Well Archer has a very different eye shape, maybe that's it.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun May 29, 2016 11:50 am

Yeah, that's what I was thinking too, which is why I don't think it's the head. I just need to make the eyes work. Though I'll mess with everything I can to see if it'll work.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun May 29, 2016 3:55 pm


Well, turns out it's the expression. So now I have two versions of it. I also messed with the shading here and there to see how that works, though I couldn't really find a solution to the arm thing.
(Also made a new signature thing fro the last hour)

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by Karasugaming on Sun May 29, 2016 4:45 pm

not too shabby LM looks really nice how its turned out suits your sprites and your personality really well.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by FutureCreator on Sun May 29, 2016 5:17 pm

It seems better now, good job

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun May 29, 2016 5:20 pm

T-hanks XD

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by Professor Morel on Mon May 30, 2016 10:35 am

Your mugshots are superb, LM -- as is the new signature -- but I believe your first rendition is better. 2nd MS's blank face seems a tad at odds with the presented pose. Perhaps if it were more serious, bemused, etc. Though as it is, I feel the smiling MS entertains more personality.

Then again, my lack of work with mugshots entails zero experience and I what I'm saying comes down to personal preference rather than legitimate semi-critiques, more likely than not. In other words, you did very nice as always!

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Mon May 30, 2016 11:11 am

Yeah, I do see what you mean with that. It was more just a random addition while the happy one is still my main one. I may modify it later down the line, along with the pose and all that. And nice as always? Hardly. I'm nowhere near that good.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by Zenox-rmp on Mon May 30, 2016 5:21 pm

Those mugshots look good.

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by Istas on Tue May 31, 2016 5:53 am

why does the smiling one remind me of johnny depp playing willy wonka? XD anyway, good job Llama

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Re: LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Post by LlamaMinister on Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:13 am

I...thanks? xD

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