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Re: Bunch of Sprites

Post by CrashAvatar on Mon Apr 20, 2015 5:32 pm

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Yria/Mara LB wrote:On the hair of the trainer sprite outlines.
On the mugshot you need lines that flow a bit better. And on the top it would profit from having a more straigther line.
The overworlds look good also a little bit of outline missing on the hair. But is it the same colour? cus it looks lighter.

Ok I'll get to work immediately. The colour of the hair is different because I preferred the colour of the lighter hair on the overworld sprite but I preferred the darker colour on the trainer and mugshot sprites, so that won't be changed.

VoilĂ ! And I have no idea about name or what pokemon types he and she would use ('he' referring to my last sprite which was met with surprisingly high praise) so if you have any ideas just quote me. And once again please give credit if used.

I love this design :3 , it's also technically good! Only thing to point out is that the ends of the pigtails aren't consistent between the trainer and overworlds.

The inconsistent pigtail lengths are to make the overworld sprites more 'chibi' if you will
I meant that the ends curl on the overworlds but not on the trainer.

Oh yeah I actually spliced the pigtails from an older less successful version of her where she had the curled pigtails so ill fix them up tomorrow for you guys

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Non-Curled Pigtails

Post by CrashAvatar on Tue Apr 21, 2015 11:43 am

TriShade wrote:
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TriShade wrote:
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Yria/Mara LB wrote:On the hair of the trainer sprite outlines.
On the mugshot you need lines that flow a bit better. And on the top it would profit from having a more straigther line.
The overworlds look good also a little bit of outline missing on the hair. But is it the same colour? cus it looks lighter.

Ok I'll get to work immediately. The colour of the hair is different because I preferred the colour of the lighter hair on the overworld sprite but I preferred the darker colour on the trainer and mugshot sprites, so that won't be changed.

VoilĂ ! And I have no idea about name or what pokemon types he and she would use ('he' referring to my last sprite which was met with surprisingly high praise) so if you have any ideas just quote me. And once again please give credit if used.

I love this design :3 , it's also technically good! Only thing to point out is that the ends of the pigtails aren't consistent between the trainer and overworlds.

The inconsistent pigtail lengths are to make the overworld sprites more 'chibi' if you will
I meant that the ends curl on the overworlds but not on the trainer.

I've fixed the hair and I hope this will be the final adjustment I have to do! hope you guys like it and if you use it can you give me credit ~<3

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I'm back! And Kirito too...

Post by CrashAvatar on Thu May 21, 2015 2:43 pm

so i havn't been spriting for a while as i have had exams, but here is my newest sprite Kirito from SAO, i'm open to HELPFUL advice


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Re: Bunch of Sprites

Post by Zenox-rmp on Thu May 21, 2015 2:55 pm

I see a little bit too much of palmer's body. But other than that it's good.

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Re: Bunch of Sprites

Post by CrashAvatar on Thu May 21, 2015 2:58 pm

Here you go (i kept the original on the left for my reference) hope you like it!


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