LM Mugshot (Attempt)

Well, I tried to make a mugshot for me, so...yay? I don't know.

Nice mugshot but alas I have two issues with it. That being the arm looks kinda short and the back of the collar could use some shading. Other than that it's a pretty good mugshot. Nicely done.

Tried to fix those two things. How's this?

The collar is better but the upper arm still looks a bit short

I feel like the jaw should be a bit wider, the way it is now it kinda looks like a girl. That may just be me, though.

I kinda see what your saying, but I will say, the head shape was "borrowed from" (in other words, it is) Archer's head, so I don't think it's the head. I'll mess with it and see what I can do.

LlamaMinister wrote:the head shape was "borrowed from" (in other words, it is) Archer's head

Well Archer has a very different eye shape, maybe that's it.

Yeah, that's what I was thinking too, which is why I don't think it's the head. I just need to make the eyes work. Though I'll mess with everything I can to see if it'll work.

Well, turns out it's the expression. So now I have two versions of it. I also messed with the shading here and there to see how that works, though I couldn't really find a solution to the arm thing.
(Also made a new signature thing fro the last hour)

not too shabby LM looks really nice how its turned out suits your sprites and your personality really well.

It seems better now, good job

T-hanks XD

Your mugshots are superb, LM -- as is the new signature -- but I believe your first rendition is better. 2nd MS's blank face seems a tad at odds with the presented pose. Perhaps if it were more serious, bemused, etc. Though as it is, I feel the smiling MS entertains more personality.

Then again, my lack of work with mugshots entails zero experience and I what I'm saying comes down to personal preference rather than legitimate semi-critiques, more likely than not. In other words, you did very nice as always!

Yeah, I do see what you mean with that. It was more just a random addition while the happy one is still my main one. I may modify it later down the line, along with the pose and all that. And nice as always? Hardly. I'm nowhere near that good.

Those mugshots look good.

why does the smiling one remind me of johnny depp playing willy wonka? XD anyway, good job Llama

I...thanks? xD