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Post by Pixel Profligate Sun Jun 14, 2015 4:58 pm

Knight of the Cleansing Fire Sprite DNYgKol
Welcome to 6 and a half hours of spriting.
Please critique and all that jazz.


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Post by Dragon Arbock Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:10 pm

Haha, yeah, I can imagine.

These are pretty good- the only thing I'd like to see is an added brighter highlight on the metal armor parts. It'd help to differentiate the composition of the armor from the clothing.

Also the flow of the cape feels a little unnatural, but I'm not 100% sure what to tell you as far as fixing it.
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Post by Zenox-rmp Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:11 pm

The only problem I see is that the head looks a little bit too big.
Other than that it looks really cool.
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Post by Pixel Profligate Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:21 pm

I might add a brighter shade for the armor, but then I would have to somehow figure it in for the gold and red bits of it as well. The cape is a scarf, but that's on me. I made it look too wide.

As for the head, I think...uh...actually, I don't know. I'll mess around with it a bit, and see what I can do.
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