Knight of the Cleansing Fire Sprite

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Knight of the Cleansing Fire Sprite

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Jun 14, 2015 4:58 pm


Welcome to 6 and a half hours of spriting.
Please critique and all that jazz.


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Re: Knight of the Cleansing Fire Sprite

Post by Dragon Arbock on Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:10 pm

Haha, yeah, I can imagine.

These are pretty good- the only thing I'd like to see is an added brighter highlight on the metal armor parts. It'd help to differentiate the composition of the armor from the clothing.

Also the flow of the cape feels a little unnatural, but I'm not 100% sure what to tell you as far as fixing it.

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Re: Knight of the Cleansing Fire Sprite

Post by Zenox-rmp on Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:11 pm

The only problem I see is that the head looks a little bit too big.
Other than that it looks really cool.

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Re: Knight of the Cleansing Fire Sprite

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:21 pm

I might add a brighter shade for the armor, but then I would have to somehow figure it in for the gold and red bits of it as well. The cape is a scarf, but that's on me. I made it look too wide.

As for the head, I think...uh...actually, I don't know. I'll mess around with it a bit, and see what I can do.

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