Trainer Back Sprite Help

I'm doing the back sprite for my trainer sprite. do you guys think the scarf looks ok?

It looks pretty good- but let me give you some advice. First off you should fix some of the double pixelations on the sprite. Also, add shadows under where the scarf falls over her back. There's an undefined light source there that just doesn't make any sense. It's also fairly flat and stiff looking. Try to give it more flow.

thanks for the reply

Heres a back throwing animation I've been working on for my Ground-Type gym leader. (In my story if I ever get to making my fan game she will team up with the protagonist for a multi-battle) Tell me what you think of this so far. I'm using the same model you are. I have the first 2 frames so far-

Joama if your going to make a fan made game you should make my sprite as a character or a main protaganist also using the Mugshot you made for me.

sorry joasama i spelt ur online name wrong X,(

Yes... well I already have those too...

i didn't say you had to use it as a protagonist you could still use my sprite as a character maybe XD

it looks good. solid shading. is that the string on glasses? that curvy red line on the back of the ear.

Can't decide what hairstyle i want for this char. longhair or ponytail.

the long haired one looks better then the pony tail :3

I personally like the pony-tail better. For some reason the long-haired one looks like she has really big and manly shoulders. The pony-tail one looks much slimmer and more feminine.

i can see it from your point of view now joasama the Ptailed one does look more Feminine then the long haired one but what if she just shortened the shoulders of the long haired one or she could have big shoulders cause she's a strong leader of a organisation :/ also reading that i modified my sprite a bit cause i saw a few mistakes that no one else saw tell me what you think :/

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@13gamer2000

somehow the right leg is bulkier than the other leg. try to experiment different upper body posture cause it doesn't match to the lower body.

@josama

thx, i also do the mugshot for it which i will post it soon if you guys are interested.

i have noticed it and i have been experimenting with it lately because they kinda look like cargo pants im probably gonna bring back the original pants because the new ones kinda look off when i experiment with them

i modified my sprite and got back the old pants and added a bit of detail. also on the left arm not the one with the pokeball but the one without one has a mega ring on it. also i got rid of my bag.

deadlyduel wrote:

Can't decide what hairstyle i want for this char. longhair or ponytail.

Her Torso is really short. I think I know, it's...HER...BOO- HER LEGS is too long.