Roleplay Discussion

I prefer the second option. But it''s just my opinion you need to decide for yourself.

The second one sounds cooler, but the first one will give you more of a unique character.

Go with first one. More unique.

First one

Should Ignis take his group to the Thunder Temple, Frost Temple, or somewhere else?

Also I was thinking legendary birds should roam freely, legendary beast reside in temples, and larger legendaries are kept dormant, in there stone forms, inside temples

I will use Magneton, Aerodactyl and Gallade.
Somebody else can decide who wins the battle. And please make it a good battle. Not like: ''After a long battle Future won.''

I'll use Reuniclus, Houndoom and Ho-oh.

Gamer, I have some problems with your last entry in the RP. Firstly how does a murkrow carry a person? Second, I find it wierd how you keep changing the point of view every two sentances, it wouldn't be that bad, if you didn't cut the text of with brackets clarifying it. And lastly how the hell did Ignis's group get to the battle so fast, considering it took them days to get to where they where, and it would presumateley take them even longer to reach LMs position. Also the fact that they even return makes the stry go in a pointless loop.

don't ask me ask silver form the pokemon adventures manga also it never said it took them days to get to there location and they are not staying with the group they only went there to investigate the sandstorm

futurecreateor wrote:Gamer, I have some problems with your last entry in the RP. Firstly how does a murkrow carry a person? Second, I find it wierd how you keep changing the point of view every two sentances, it wouldn't be that bad, if you didn't cut the text of with brackets clarifying it. And lastly how the hell did Ignis's group get to the battle so fast, considering it took them days to get to where they where, and it would presumateley take them even longer to reach LMs position. Also the fact that they even return makes the stry go in a pointless loop.

He can fix the Murkrow thing with Yria just calling up Zapdos :/. Atleast you fly.
Or it could be a referance to the real pokemon games. Flying a pidgey all day ://.

I didn't say zapdos because i thought that it would be best (in the RP) to make Zapdos remain inconspicuous meaning that it should not be used willy nilly for simple tasks

I feel it would make more sense if they just walked. I understand that a sandstorm near a forest is really weird, but it could just be a pokemon doing it, which is the easiest explanation to it. Or at the very least, everyone rides towards it. Yria could ride with Ignis and Entei. I do agree with Futures comment about them comming back in as a pointless loop because they just left and they are training, so going to investigate a sandstorm wouldn't be high on their priority list.

13gamer2000 wrote:I didn't say zapdos because i thought that it would be best (in the RP) to make Zapdos remain inconspicuous meaning that it should not be used willy nilly for simple tasks

Then why did Ignis send out Entei?

if you read the update of the RP it did say that yria said why did i not just ride entei with ignis :I

13gamer2000 wrote:if you read the update of the RP it did say that yria said why did i not just ride entei with ignis :I

I think Crim is asking why he used his legendary for a simple task, but not Yria.

ignis can use his entei because he was given entei and everyone knows he has entei
not everyone knows that yrias has zapdos (future and his team)
i rest my case

My older point still stands. They have no reason to investigate the sandstorm because Pokemon can create one, and it's not that uncommon, especially with Pokemon near mountains, who are typically ground and rock type who would benefit from sandstorms as a defensive mechanism.

You never did adress the point of view changing, though....

futurecreateor wrote:You never did adress the point of view changing, though....

Thats just because you addressed it very well and I had nothing to add to what you said.

im not going to be updating the RP for a while i only updated it because people rarely update it so I decided to update it and im starting to get sick of the criticism that im getting just for updating the RP when no one else had the guts to update it
so im glad that you think your trying to help but all this criticism is starting to stress me out alot when im trying to do stuff for the silver league.

also i won't be spriting for a while either or making any banners for a while but i will still be hanging around in chat box's for a while.


Yours sincerely
13gamer2000

Okay, Gamer;
Firstly, people weren't posting because they didn't know what to write or they didn't have any inspiration for a new post. It has nothing to do with people not having "the guts to update it".

Secondly, I can understand getting stressed out about all of the criticism people are giving you for the last post, but that's just because it went against a lot of previous posts and filled the RP with a lot of plot holes and problems. It also had a lot of punctuation and grammatical errors, and I know you explained why this happens before, but it does not excuse it.

Again, I understand the frustration and stress you have from this, but people are just trying to help fix the problems with the post. People could be nicer and more constructive in the way they go about this, including me, but please just take some of the things they have said into consideration, or if what they say confuses you, ask them about it. Also use the Chatbox as a way to get ideas about what people want in the RP. We are all willing to help out with posts, you just need to ask us. I'm sorry if this sounds mean or anything like that, because I don't intend for it to sound like that. Just please listen to what people are saying.

1 last sentence for you
I Have Aspergers That Is Why I Don't Understand A Lot About What Most People Are Trying To Explain And That Is Why Im Getting Stressed Out!

I didn't know about that, nor do most people, I think. Thank you for mentioning it and shedding some light on the subject. No hard feelings?

I agree with Llama.

Look, gamer, when you are working in a group you should either apply the critisism given to you or let someone else apply it. You did answer for some of the issues people had with the RP, but yet you did nothing to fix them. I suggest either take the given critisism into consideration, ask about the parts you can't figure out, or just delete your post and let somebody else sort things out. Because now everyone is in a position where they don't know if you will edit or delete or do whatever to your recent post, and because of this no one can write another part of the RP. Also concerning the grammar, I honestly don't find it necesarry to edit that, since a lot of us have trouble with grammar.