Revamped OC!

by verys Tue May 31, 2016 1:31 am

I decided to take some time and edit my OC, Nove.
Aaaaannnnnd... I ended up doing more than I had planned.

Original Sprite:

New Sprite:

Feel free to criticize, I don't know about the colors just yet...
:D

by Karasugaming Tue May 31, 2016 5:53 pm

looks good but I have to say this....
EMO!
nah just kidding its pretty decent.

by Pixel Profligate Tue May 31, 2016 6:02 pm

My biggest gripe with this is the torso is VERY short, which makes the legs look too long. Otherwise, nice.

by verys Tue May 31, 2016 9:57 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:My biggest gripe with this is the torso is VERY short, which makes the legs look too long. Otherwise, nice.

Yep. That was my biggest issue with it as well. I'm working on that, as well as buffing up the twiggy limbs. -_-

by CrimsonIgnis Tue May 31, 2016 11:25 pm

Adding to what Llama said, the shape of his chest looks odd to me and his right leg kinda looks like it has spaghetti syndrome with it curving back in the knee and curving forward with the foot. Aside from all that I really like the design man. Good job.