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Post by noverys on Tue May 31, 2016 1:31 am

I decided to take some time and edit my OC, Nove.
Aaaaannnnnd... I ended up doing more than I had planned.
Original Sprite:
New Sprite:
Feel free to criticize, I don't know about the colors just yet...
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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by Karasugaming on Tue May 31, 2016 5:53 pm

looks good but I have to say this....
EMO!
nah just kidding its pretty decent.
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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by LlamaMinister on Tue May 31, 2016 6:02 pm

My biggest gripe with this is the torso is VERY short, which makes the legs look too long. Otherwise, nice.

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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by noverys on Tue May 31, 2016 9:57 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:My biggest gripe with this is the torso is VERY short, which makes the legs look too long. Otherwise, nice.
Yep. That was my biggest issue with it as well. I'm working on that, as well as buffing up the twiggy limbs. -_-
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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by CrimsonIgnis on Tue May 31, 2016 11:25 pm

Adding to what Llama said, the shape of his chest looks odd to me and his right leg kinda looks like it has spaghetti syndrome with it curving back in the knee and curving forward with the foot. Aside from all that I really like the design man. Good job.
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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by noverys on Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:08 pm

Here is the freshly edited version!
Edit:
I think the legs should still be shorter...
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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by Zenox-rmp on Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:43 pm

It looks really cool. I love the design.

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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by noverys on Wed Jun 01, 2016 2:51 pm

Very Happy
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Re: Revamped OC!

Post by LlamaMinister on Wed Jun 01, 2016 6:04 pm

Slightly longer torso, slightly shorter legs, and you'll be in business.

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