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Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by AustinPkmnTrainer on Thu Jul 09, 2015 5:30 pm

I wanted to post some Pixel art I made. Not the best but what do you think?


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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by FutureCreator on Thu Jul 09, 2015 5:47 pm

I think you should post the original, because this is impossible to critique. Its blured and upscaled, though from what I can tell the colours are horribly garish and blinding.

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by AustinPkmnTrainer on Thu Jul 09, 2015 5:53 pm

futurecreateor wrote:I think you should post the original, because this is impossible to critique. Its blured and upscaled, though from what I can tell the colours are horribly garish and blinding.
Fair enough, Ill get onto that.

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by TriShade on Thu Jul 09, 2015 5:57 pm

I agree with what Future said for the most part. The first one is the male trainer from BW2 recoloured with some retooled hair. The colours make it look both garish and bland somehow. If you toned down the colours, it wouldn't be too bad. There are some outlines to fix, mostly on the left side (viewer's POV), the elbow on that side is rather large and odd looking, and the hair is oddly shaded. The second sprite suffers from some similar problems (garish colours, stiff leg, hat cut off, oddly shaded hair, and some straight lines) but the design has a lot of potential. It has a lot of character and with some fixing could be a great sprite!

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by AustinPkmnTrainer on Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:01 pm

TriShade wrote:I agree with what Future said for the most part. The first one is the male trainer from BW2 recoloured with some retooled hair. The colours make it look both garish and bland somehow. If you toned down the colours, it wouldn't be too bad. There are some outlines to fix, mostly on the left side (viewer's POV), the elbow on that side is rather large and odd looking, and the hair is oddly shaded. The second sprite suffers from some similar problems (garish colours, stiff leg, hat cut off, oddly shaded hair, and some straight lines) but the design has a lot of potential. It has a lot of character and with some fixing could be a great sprite!
Thanks! Im new to this so your constructive criticism helps a lot.

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by LlamaMinister on Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:10 pm

They pretty much covered everything that I would have said. It's great to see a new pixel artist, though. I wish you the best of luck on the rest of your pixel art endeavors, and we will be more than willing to help you out with it.

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by AustinPkmnTrainer on Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:16 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:They pretty much covered everything that I would have said. It's great to see a new pixel artist, though. I wish you the best of luck on the rest of your pixel art endeavors, and we will be more than willing to help you out with it.
Thank you, it means a lot. Hopefully one day soon I could wow you with my pixel art unlike today Razz

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by LlamaMinister on Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:23 pm

No problem Smile I look forward to seeing what you make in the future.

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Re: Sharing some Pixel Art

Post by Dragon Arbock on Thu Jul 09, 2015 10:21 pm

(Oh, hello there- I'm a little late ^-^Wink

What LM said, though, and remember, everyone has to start somewhere and develop their skills. If you keep at it though, it won't be long Like a Star @ heaven

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