My trainer sprites and current avatar.
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Dragon Arbock
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FutureCreator
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My trainer sprites and current avatar.
Just looking for critique on my trainer sprite, mugshot and overworlds (which are mostly just simple retools), and the little animal which is currently my avatar, which is meant to be a pine marten.
RandomUncertainty- Lv. 5 Regice
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Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
The Mugshot is very good (But BTW the hand looks pretty little ) . The trainer sprite too but the boots don't fits with the character . OWs are good too . And the pine marten , THE PINE MARTEN , I love it ,Triple Green Checkmarks !
Zell Justice- Superior Serperior
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Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
The mugshot is just adorable, its perfect, I love what you did with the hair (the hand is a bit tiny though). As for the marten, you should make the ears smaller and less curved, also I would suggest making the head smaller.
FutureCreator- Post Level: Banned from Ubers
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Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
Not bad! The proportions on the mugshot are a bit off in places, and the overworlds could match a bit better, but they look really good.
Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
The pokemon's cute, but a narrower snout and slightly less bushy (and more distinct tail than that of Minccino) would help it look more like the animal you are trying to portray.
Everyone else already covered the rest.
Everyone else already covered the rest.
Dragon Arbock- Team Rocket Scientist
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Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
Everyone already took my comments about it, so good work. Just iron out those flaws previously mentioned by everyone else, and it'll be great.
Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
That mugshot is adorable!. Teach me XD
Yria/Mara LB- Bizarre Adventurer
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Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
I love the mugshot its so cute. I also like your little avatar (Oh my gosh I just google imaged what a pine marten and those things are freaking adorable). Anyways these are some really nicely done sprites keep up the good work!
CrimsonIgnis- Shorts Cultist
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Re: My trainer sprites and current avatar.
The mugshot is so adorable omg! The facial expression, the hair, everything >u< (It's already been mentioned, but yeah the hand is a bit too small). And the overworld is nice, too. The trainer sprite has some flaws though. Mainly the arms. The straight arm looks broken with that extra bump there (which I know is a problem with the original Jasmine sprite) and it's a bit too stiff. Having a slight bend in the arm would make it more relaxed. Or if you have the second animation frame, you could use that straight arm instead. The other arm looks kind of off to me, too. Maybe give it an extra pixel at the bottom to give her an elbow would look better. And the hair on the trainer sprite doesn't quite match the hair on the mugshot. But other than that, you have some very cute sprites and I look forward to seeing more ^^
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