DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

so I haven't done a trainer sprite for a while and a friend of mine asked me to make her one with DBZ colours. please give help full criticism.

Hmm. The legs are very thin and its just... concerning that they get tinner above the knee. I suggest fixing that. The dress also looks a lil everywhere. It also misses some outlines. For the rest it looks great but I suggest fixing those things ^^.

you mean thiner? or are you talking about the shading? (if its the shading its supposed to cast a shadow affect.) I don't see how the dress is everywhere seeing as all I did was change the colour of that wiered trainer girl with the arcanine from DPP when you beat the elite 4 and go to the place where the shaymin event occurs. but i'll have a closer look at it later and see what I can do.

On the legs im not talking about the shading. Im saying they are very thin. Not thiner. Just thin. And even if the dress is from an official trainer sprite it doesnt fix its problems.

Karasugaming wrote:you mean thiner? or are you talking about the shading? (if its the shading its supposed to cast a shadow affect.) I don't see how the dress is everywhere seeing as all I did was change the colour of that wiered trainer girl with the arcanine from DPP when you beat the elite 4 and go to the place where the shaymin event occurs. but i'll have a closer look at it later and see what I can do.

The dress works on her because it's black and white, when you add colour it just kinda blends into a mess.

ah now that I see what you mean yria I can probably fix it.

Future creator:
The dress works on her because it's black and white, when you add colour it just kinda blends into a mess.


maybe if I try to make the colours darker it could work.

I think you should try outlining it a bit more

I tried giving it more outlines when making it. It did not look nice just really messy

I saw DBZ in here so I just wanna post these ;-; Imma so lonelai

got cut off

It's actually cut off from Super Saiyan 3

any better?

Monkey man!

Karasugaming wrote:Monkey man!

Lol thanks