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Post by Karasugaming Fri May 13, 2016 6:27 am

I tried to create MYGenderIsLitwick A.K.A Spider into a trainer sprite by using gardenia as a base I think its kinda good but others will probably give some helpfull tips of improvement.

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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri May 13, 2016 12:00 pm

This sprite is alright, though it does suffer from a fair few things.

First, the shading is...weird. Some of the shading makes the light source almost indistinguishable, and some of the shades of color are far too close to tell apart, like the golds, the purples, and the blues. Even the black is a sufferer of this.

Another problem with this sprite is, quite frankly, the Gardenia base. Her proportions are awkward and are VERY hard to make work on other sprites. Unfortunately, this one doesn't work too well. Also, she has a severe case of noodle arm with her left arm.

This was a good effort in trying to make the sprite, but it does fall short. With some more work, though, I could see this working. It would need a fair amount of scratch work to get to work, but it could.
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Post by Hex Maniac Quinn Fri May 13, 2016 3:03 pm

I would also add that I wish you had told me that you were planning to work on this... I believe I remember you saying you were up for it, but I said I'd pick and contact someone in private about details for making it... one of the things I mentioned when discussing finding a spriter was that there were some definite changes I wanted to make from what is currently my profile picture, details that I would send in private. I've already contacted Prof. Morrel who has already gone to some lengths, still working on mine and has what's done so far submitted in the OC trainer part of the ongoing spriting contest. Though, I do appreciate the effort, deciding to try and help me out.
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri May 13, 2016 3:43 pm

Oh, you went with Morel, eh? Good choice. Though I would have loved if you picked me, you are in great hands with him. I may help him out, though, should he really need it. If you are okay with that.
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Post by Hex Maniac Quinn Fri May 13, 2016 4:05 pm

Oh yeah, he already mentioned using criticism from the contest, bringing someone else in, etc. It actually surprises me all the hard work that's being put into one commission, but it's much appreciated. If you offer your help and he takes it, then I have absolutely nothing against that.
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri May 13, 2016 4:07 pm

Oh, yeah, he's a hard worker on things like this. He won't half ass it in the sort. But we all hit brick walls sometimes when we don't have a sledgehammer, and need to bring someone else in to smash down the wall.
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Post by Karasugaming Sat May 14, 2016 1:00 am

yeah I know what you said about the sprite request but I decided to just experiment with changing sprites that already existed so I experimented with gardenia. I do appreciate the feed back though
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Post by Hex Maniac Quinn Sat May 14, 2016 2:38 pm

Ok, that's cool. Cool
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