Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Dragon Arbock on Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:03 pm

I know I'm late but nobody ever gives me a hard enough time for it..

Essix wrote:
So, I can tell that's Serperior and Dragonair, but what is that face?- Pretty sure it's Dragonair's but it's hard to make out with all the details around it. Using a gray outline would have helped some, but I think the leaf curl blocking the eye is worse. You also left gray outline on the stomach from Dragonair, which should now be green. As a fusion it feels more like a Serperior repose, or a Dragonair disguising itself as one, rather than a clear mix of the two pokemon. Another thing, where the leaf collar connects it stops abruptly and goes straight down, rather than being a smooth curve. The sprite wouldn't be so bad, but the face blending in so much with the other details brings it down.
C

Karasugaming wrote:
This is cute and not that bad. However, using actual black outline for the black side of the hoodie would have helped, as the colors are already too close together. It is also perplexing that the pants are black but use lighter shades. If you mixed the shadow color of the hoodie and used the shadow of the pants as the highlight for the hoodie, it would have looked better. For the most part, the sprite just needs more contrast.
B-

FutureCreator wrote:
I already forgot this was a pokemon. Ignoring it being forgettable, this is really rather good. Could have used perhaps a lighter gray to outline parts of the pink, but I'm unsure of the color limits for these as is.
A

nya2468 wrote:
This is cool. I admit I'm unsure if there are for PMD or HG/SS, but I'm gonna say they're too big for the latter. As far as what criticism I have for them, well largely has to do with an inconsistency I see. On the side view, the bottom part of the mane comes down much further than in the front view- in the front it should be blocking the rest of the chest. Meanwhile, from the side, the pokemon is too skinny. The chest and body area should come down closer to where the legs bend. Otherwise, the face is and mane are nicely detailed.
B

noverys wrote:
Oh, I do see the improvement from when you posted it in a different thread. I think this sprite is pretty good, with only a few little things for me to nitpick. Mostly, the shading on the arms is a bit sharp. With the arm across the chest, it looks a little like he has scars. With the arm holding the pokeball, the upper arm muscle is bulging when it should not be. Other than that, nothing much bad to say about this sprite.
A-

Infinity Calli wrote:
Biggest flaw this sprite has is lack of contrast, or in places like the arms, lack of shading altogether. The hat also has no shading on the blue, and the outline uses its lights and darks in the wrong places. Meanwhile the hair is solid black, which should be avoided, an the outline of anything above the waist has missing pixels. I see the effort, but it lacks polish.
C-

CrimsonIgnis wrote:
Oh.. live action to sprite. Fun. I will say that's a lot of details to try and fit into a sprite like this, so to even try is commendable. As for the sprite itself, it looks fairly good. One complaint I do have is not using some silver on the front of the weapon to help it stand out a bit more, though it only helps so much. The free hand is also a little weird- you would see at least two of the fingers from the side since the pinky is shorter. One other thing is the shoes have some double-black on the bottom. Still, pretty nice for what it is.
A-

And now for the evolution/pre-evolution round;

Essix wrote:
Biggest problem I have with this is the shell. Lapras's shell is nothing like a gastropod's so using a spiral shell here is somewhat unbelievable. This pokemon is also rather large for a pre evolution. Ignoring that, the eye is blocky, and the cream underbelly ends abruptly. The shell is also not centered on its back, with the front-left edge ending on the right side of its neck. Overall, it needs work.
D+

noverys wrote:
While unique, this looks oddly more like an alolan form of diglett or dugtrio. The sprite itself looks nice enough, though some of the branches are more lobe-like, as they don't get thinner as they get further from the stem. Shading, however, is spot on.
B+

Jathavan wrote:
Meanwhile, this pre evolution looks too similar to its final. It's almost just like it, except without the bolts in the sides and smaller jaws. Issues I have with the sprite include the eyes, which are close to rectangular, along with there being no shading on the legs. The metal is shaded nicely, but that's all it has going for it.
C-

CrimsonIgnis wrote:
Now this is cute, if anything. The snout and legs reminds me a bit of Turtwig, so I think it's clear to me what it was based off, but that doesn't really detract from it otherwise. As a pokemon it is believable as the pre evolution to Torkoal, and I can't find much to complain about regarding the spritework.
A

Mizuurei wrote:
Okay, you're late.. but I'm late too, so you get one warning. Anyway, Spiritomb is not a pokemon I would have thought needed an evolution, but this is kinda cool. I will say it makes an interesting use of the orbs. If I have any issues, it's that pure black should not have been used for the eye swirls. Also, a little hard to tell that the one hand has a 'beckoning' finger pose, but that's because I couldn't distinguish the other finger from the arm. I also think the one sphere shoulder would have looked better behind the face than in front, but that's preference.
A-

Okay.. this week's round;
Create an eeveelution for a type eevee cannot evolve into
End date; 10/1

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Essix on Wed Sep 28, 2016 2:55 pm

Dragon type eeveelution.
It doesn't look like dragon but eh?

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by CrimsonIgnis on Sat Oct 01, 2016 9:38 pm



Here's a poison type eeveelution.
I was going for a bit of a feral/rabid animal sort of design.


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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Dragon Arbock on Sun Oct 02, 2016 2:03 pm

Hm.. should I extend this round since I only got two entries?

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by FutureCreator on Sun Oct 02, 2016 4:37 pm

WAIT STILL ON TIME!
This is Spectreon (almost named it Oni-on till I realised how that sounded). Based on the concept of spirit fire and those wierd japanese bead necklaces.

EDIT: Forgot to specify, if you haven't guessed it's a Ghost type.

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by J A Y on Mon Oct 03, 2016 1:08 pm

http://imgur.com/as6dTkz

Sorry, thought the round was over already cuz of the rating.
Its a prevolution to Throh and Sawk. doesn´t have a name.

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Karasugaming on Mon Oct 03, 2016 6:26 pm

wrong round its an eeveelution round

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by J A Y on Tue Oct 04, 2016 7:53 am

Oh god dammit

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by J A Y on Tue Oct 04, 2016 11:30 am

Ok, now for real.
I present you a dragon-type eeveelution. Call it what you will, i call Draceon.
http://imgur.com/JEK5arb

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Dragon Arbock on Mon Oct 10, 2016 2:37 am

I will judge in the morning, was busy.. but for now;
Next round; Sprite your ideal final evolution to the Alola starters.
End date; 10/15

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by FutureCreator on Mon Oct 10, 2016 5:36 pm

;(((((( Not taking part in this one, didn't spoil the second evos for myself yet.
I might take part if it can be based on just the first forms.

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by noverys on Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:00 pm

Wait, do we sprite all three or just one?

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Dragon Arbock on Mon Oct 10, 2016 7:23 pm

Just one.
And Future, you can base it off the first if you want. For some people the middle forms might already not be leading to 'ideal'.

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Re: Silver League Sprite Contest [Eeveelution round - extended to 10/8]

Post by Essix on Thu Dec 01, 2016 11:36 am

So is this on or not? I really want to know cus I liked this!

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