I've been practicing creating scratch sprites.

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I've been practicing creating scratch sprites.

Post by Karasugaming on Sun Apr 03, 2016 7:06 pm

so I was bored and inspiration comes to me when I am bored and can't think of anything to do. I have created a scratch flowey sprite (from undertale) and a scratch Jibanyan sprite (from Yokai-Watch) enjoy with your eye holes.



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Re: I've been practicing creating scratch sprites.

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Apr 03, 2016 11:13 pm

These look pretty good, but one thing I think you need to work on is (oh, just the thing I'm always super picky about) the shading. On the Flowey one, it has not one, not two, but three different light sources. Now, two on it I can understand, since you'd want shading on the top of the flower petals, but also on the stem and flower pot, but the fact those have highlights coming from opposite directions makes...well, little sense.
Also, I'd just say work on your colors, especially outlines unless it's a very specific style of sprite. The all seem too close, and could just use some...pop? That's a bad word to use to describe it, but that's all I got right now.

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Re: I've been practicing creating scratch sprites.

Post by Karasugaming on Tue Apr 05, 2016 5:48 pm

ty ryan for your advice on what you think should be fixed with these sprites. I get what your coming at with the different light sources and yeah I did know I did that on purpose xD I wanted to try not using any black outlining and it looked cool IMO but shading is something that always needs to be practiced. ty ryan

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