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Post by Karasugaming on Thu Mar 10, 2016 7:24 am

so I haven't done a trainer sprite for a while and a friend of mine asked me to make her one with DBZ colours. please give help full criticism.


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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by Yria/Mara LB on Thu Mar 10, 2016 9:31 am

Hmm. The legs are very thin and its just... concerning that they get tinner above the knee. I suggest fixing that. The dress also looks a lil everywhere. It also misses some outlines. For the rest it looks great but I suggest fixing those things ^^.

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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by Karasugaming on Thu Mar 10, 2016 5:20 pm

you mean thiner? or are you talking about the shading? (if its the shading its supposed to cast a shadow affect.) I don't see how the dress is everywhere seeing as all I did was change the colour of that wiered trainer girl with the arcanine from DPP when you beat the elite 4 and go to the place where the shaymin event occurs. but i'll have a closer look at it later and see what I can do.

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Post by Yria/Mara LB on Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:28 am

On the legs im not talking about the shading. Im saying they are very thin. Not thiner. Just thin. And even if the dress is from an official trainer sprite it doesnt fix its problems.

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Post by FutureCreator on Fri Mar 11, 2016 12:07 pm

Karasugaming wrote:you mean thiner? or are you talking about the shading? (if its the shading its supposed to cast a shadow affect.) I don't see how the dress is everywhere seeing as all I did was change the colour of that wiered trainer girl with the arcanine from DPP when you beat the elite 4 and go to the place where the shaymin event occurs. but i'll have a closer look at it later and see what I can do.
The dress works on her because it's black and white, when you add colour it just kinda blends into a mess.

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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by Karasugaming on Sat Mar 12, 2016 2:19 am

ah now that I see what you mean yria I can probably fix it.

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The dress works on her because it's black and white, when you add colour it just kinda blends into a mess.


maybe if I try to make the colours darker it could work.

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Post by FutureCreator on Sat Mar 12, 2016 3:07 am

I think you should try outlining it a bit more

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Post by Karasugaming on Sat Mar 12, 2016 3:17 am

I tried giving it more outlines when making it. It did not look nice just really messy

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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by ZeroScale on Sun Mar 20, 2016 3:43 am

I saw DBZ in here so I just wanna post these ;-; Imma so lonelai

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Post by ZeroScale on Sun Mar 20, 2016 3:44 am


got cut off

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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by FutureCreator on Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:17 am

It's actually cut off from Super Saiyan 3

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Post by ZeroScale on Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:29 am

any better?

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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by Karasugaming on Sun Mar 20, 2016 6:24 pm

Monkey man!

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Re: DBZ Fangirl Emma appears

Post by ZeroScale on Thu Mar 24, 2016 11:26 am

Karasugaming wrote:Monkey man!
Lol thanks

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