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BetaX Sprite

Post by BetaX on Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:17 pm

This is me, BetaX
This is my Final Form of me. What do you think of my Sprite Cause I need Criticism?


Last edited by BetaX64 on Wed Nov 26, 2014 8:56 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Fixed Sprites)

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Post by Joasama on Thu Sep 11, 2014 7:54 pm

I'm no pro at this... but that looks super cool. I personally liked the black better but the white makes him look more Arceus-like. Is that what you were going for?

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by BetaX on Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:50 pm

Somewhat yes

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by absolheart on Fri Sep 12, 2014 9:59 pm

Its great, but I'm kinda confused with the feet. It looks odd, but seeing as it does seem to be a arceus themed sprite, I'll just not dwell on it. It seems like the betaX non-final form has more detail and had more time spent on it. The final form just... Isn't as detailed, but could be just as good if not better if you touched it up a bit and made it look as if you didn't paint-bucket every piece of his suit.

But good job, regardless. Very Happy keep up the good work!

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Post by Joasama on Fri Sep 12, 2014 10:08 pm

I noticed on the mugshot that the sword staff thingy doesn't extend behind his back- you can't see any of the blade part even though judging by the way he's holding it you should be able to. And is that a mega stone on his staff?

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by absolheart on Fri Sep 12, 2014 10:13 pm

I think in the part you cant see the blade it's going outwards, or out of the shot, seeing as how he's holding the handle by the rear section, as well as the fact the handle is leaning downwards from the point he's holding it, suggesting that the blades weight is tilting the sword forwards.

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by Joasama on Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:10 pm

Yeah that makes sense.

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by realmd on Sat Nov 15, 2014 7:52 pm

Can someone make me a trainer sprite I was thinking like one like silver august but cooler

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by realmd on Sat Nov 15, 2014 8:16 pm

plz

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by MegaEevee on Sat Nov 15, 2014 9:33 pm

It looks great as far as i can tell but, i personally like the original one better! keep up the good work :3

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RE:betaX sprite

Post by Karasugaming on Sun Nov 16, 2014 5:47 pm

i have seen your work before betax and it is amazing i must say though you really did put alot of effort into the overworld sprite and all the other normal form of BetaX and i should of guessed that you got the idea Final form from Kingdom hearts II. there are several problems with the Final form of BetaX as you can see above also some ideas for it are you could put more detail into the green gem thats at the end of the sword to make it more gem like. you could maybe add a mega stone to the gauntlet like hands and maybe just add more detail just like the normal BetaX. although you outdid yourself then normal BetaX.

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by BetaX on Wed Nov 26, 2014 7:49 pm

@13gamer2000
that green thing weren't suppose to be gem like and adding another mega stone work. if you look closely at the trainer sprite you see the blue and purple pixel in his/my sword, that's a mega stone.

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Re: BetaX Sprite

Post by Aldin on Wed Nov 26, 2014 9:12 pm

that is pretty epic Very Happy

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ahh

Post by Karasugaming on Thu Nov 27, 2014 10:47 pm

i can see the mega stone now it looks nice also they looked like the green thingos on arceus that why i thought it was a gem

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