Random Sprites I have (with some gif action)
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Random Sprites I have (with some gif action)
So i have some sprites i did that i cant really categorize as anything so enjoy :p
LightOfAKnowing- Wild Abra
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These are pretty solid, but I think the zombies might work better with different poses. Otherwise, I don't have much to say about them. They have some minor flaws here and there, but nothing super major.
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Hmm once i get better at changing poses ill be sure to remember to come back to the zombies.
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Okay. If you wamt me to go into a lot of detail on what to fix, I can by the way. It's just that I'm tired right now.
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LlamaMinister wrote:Okay. If you wamt me to go into a lot of detail on what to fix, I can by the way. It's just that I'm tired right now.
I think i'll just leave it to expirementation but if you'd like you can still give the advice. I greatly appreciate the offer. (ps i was a tad excited when i say you replied since i've been checking out alot of the things you've done [particually the pokeballs which will be a DREAM to have avaliable now so thanks].
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Wow. Well, it's great to know that someone is excited when I reply to them. That's actually really encouraging, so thank you. As for the sprites, I'll review them over for a bit and see what I think can be improved. Also, those Pokeballs are free to use. If you do use them, you don't need to give credit, bu t it would be appreciated. I can't wait to see more of your work.
Re: Random Sprites I have (with some gif action)
There actually isn't a whole lot I can say on fixing them, since they seem to be mostly recolors, but I'll still try my best.
The swimmer is pretty solid, but the hand holding the Pokeball looks, well, not like a hand. The upper arm also looks too short, and the forearm looks too long. In other words, the arm is proportioned weird. It also bugs me that I can't see the back arm at all, but that's just a pet peeve of mine, so don't take as a problem. Other than that, nothing much else I can say. Everything else is pretty good on it, and, to be honest, the hair color looks fantastic.
The kids are pretty solid, but I have more to say about the boy than the girl, and that's a good thing. The painting he is holding looks really good, and it's a really nice touch. The beret also looks really good, but some shading on the hair to make it look like it's blocking the light would be even better. The only real problem I have with it is the shirt, and it's mainly the colors. With the current colors used, I can't tell if it's just a shirt, or he is wearing a grey vest. Other than that, he is really good. As for the girl, it's just alright. It is just a little underwhelming compared to the boy. While there isn't really anything wrong with the sprite (besides the middle shade of purple on the dress being a bit too dark), it just seems unoriginal.
The zombie ones are cool in theory, but could use some touching up. Firstly, the parts that were added (the exposed brain and I would assume ribs, even though they are too low to be ribs), just look like they were put right on them, like paint or a sticker, and they lack any real depth. I would also suggest giving them more dead expressions, but that's just an idea. The green used for the skin looks pretty good too. And, as I already said, these would probably work better with different/more custom poses.
The Robo-Buneary is just good. Not much I can say. I like it, and that's all I got.
All together, they aren't half bad. They're pretty good, to be honest, especially the boy painter. You show real promise as a spriter, and I can't wait to see more of your work in the future. My suggestion for a next step is to mess around with different poses, and adding in more scratch work. Best of luck with your future sprites.
The swimmer is pretty solid, but the hand holding the Pokeball looks, well, not like a hand. The upper arm also looks too short, and the forearm looks too long. In other words, the arm is proportioned weird. It also bugs me that I can't see the back arm at all, but that's just a pet peeve of mine, so don't take as a problem. Other than that, nothing much else I can say. Everything else is pretty good on it, and, to be honest, the hair color looks fantastic.
The kids are pretty solid, but I have more to say about the boy than the girl, and that's a good thing. The painting he is holding looks really good, and it's a really nice touch. The beret also looks really good, but some shading on the hair to make it look like it's blocking the light would be even better. The only real problem I have with it is the shirt, and it's mainly the colors. With the current colors used, I can't tell if it's just a shirt, or he is wearing a grey vest. Other than that, he is really good. As for the girl, it's just alright. It is just a little underwhelming compared to the boy. While there isn't really anything wrong with the sprite (besides the middle shade of purple on the dress being a bit too dark), it just seems unoriginal.
The zombie ones are cool in theory, but could use some touching up. Firstly, the parts that were added (the exposed brain and I would assume ribs, even though they are too low to be ribs), just look like they were put right on them, like paint or a sticker, and they lack any real depth. I would also suggest giving them more dead expressions, but that's just an idea. The green used for the skin looks pretty good too. And, as I already said, these would probably work better with different/more custom poses.
The Robo-Buneary is just good. Not much I can say. I like it, and that's all I got.
All together, they aren't half bad. They're pretty good, to be honest, especially the boy painter. You show real promise as a spriter, and I can't wait to see more of your work in the future. My suggestion for a next step is to mess around with different poses, and adding in more scratch work. Best of luck with your future sprites.
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Llama said it all. Other than that I like them.
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Why do I find that bunnelby so cute,,, XD
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Bunnelby is another pokémon.
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I dont know anymore! XD.
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Buneary is the pre-evo of the playboy pokémon.
Bunnelby evolves in to Diggersby tho.
Bunnelby evolves in to Diggersby tho.
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Zenox-rmp wrote:Buneary is the pre-evo of the playboy pokémon.
Bunnelby evolves in to Diggersby tho.
Yeah I get the rest, but buneary and bunnelby sound alike.
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True.
True, man.
Tru, man.
Truman.
True, man.
Tru, man.
Truman.
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