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Post by Explotar the Typlosion on Tue Aug 04, 2015 9:17 pm

Hi New Sprite here Tell me all i need to improve


           



Crimson i did not take any( colors, parts, and etc.) okay


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Re: Newest Sprite

Post by LlamaMinister on Tue Aug 04, 2015 9:44 pm

I see you did try to fix the problems with the first sprite, and some of those changes work well, like the brown outline on the pants. One thing that really bugs me is the fact that he pretty much has no neck at all. The collar of the jacket is also really boxy and unnatural. The shading on the nearest shoulder also seems to go against the light source for the rest of the sprite. In general, the shading could use more work, but that might also just be a factor of me preferring to do detail shading over smooth shading. I also think the middle shade of grey in the hair may be a bit too dark because it's blending into the outline grey a bit. Also, when I said to use more grey on the hair outline, I didn't mean in place of the black. It just seemed there was too much black in the outline.

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Re: Newest Sprite

Post by Professor Morel on Wed Aug 05, 2015 7:41 pm

I agree with LM. This sprite is in dire need of a neck. Additionally, his shirt's bottom is way too straight. Most clothing has a tendency to bulge up, create small creases, or just curve with the body. Here, the straight line gives indication of the area in question being flat. Which it shouldn't be.

But yeah. Just keep updating this thread, and people will give you any pointers you need to make great sprites of your very own.

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