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Post by Karasugaming on Mon Jul 27, 2015 2:37 am

In this forum will be a story about Marc before S2 and why he is the kind of character he is.

To start it off I will do a introduction to this story.

After the events of the attack on jelliopolis a 15 year old boy woke up underneath a tree not knowing how he got there realising that he has pokeballs in his pocket and a locket around his neck he did not have a key to open the locket. Touching a piece of grass Marc found accidentally freezed part of the grassy area discovering that he has ice magic. Marc walked into town thinking to himself of how he could of possibly ended up in this world thinking that he was from another world. In the town Marc found a tavern and decided to go inside. there was a request board for bounties on peoples heads. Marc asked one of the Bar tenders what these bounties are for and the bar tender replied saying that bounty hunters can go on those jobs and assassinate the person on the poster. Marc realised that he needed some money and decided to go on one of these jobs. Before he left a mysterious figure touched his shoulder it was a woman around the same age as Marc her name was Hato. (tri knows who Hato is because she created her (gender swapped karasu) ). Hato told Marc about the danger of being a bounty hunter and gave him a long sword and asked to join him on the job he was going on. Marc replied with a nod and the two went off into the mountains to take down a criminal called The man that controls winds.

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by FutureCreator on Mon Jul 27, 2015 6:35 am

Where is the sad part, or will you post more?

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there will be more

Post by Karasugaming on Mon Jul 27, 2015 5:21 pm

there will be more
there are 6 acts
the when it goes further near the 6th act it will become sadder/more intense/edge of your seat (meaning that your gonna wonder who is going to die when it goes further and yes someone is going to die in the story)
act 1 is the story I just posted act 1 is called the awakening

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Act 2: the man who controls the wind. Taka and the shadow Suicune

Post by Karasugaming on Sat Aug 08, 2015 8:10 am

As Marc and Hato start there 1st assasination mission Marc looks back at the info on the man who controls wind on the flier that had the job request on it.

the man who controls wind
wanted dead or alive
information:
this man has been known to work in the north area of the region and has had a mysterious pokemon seen around the areas where his crimes have been commited.
Crimes:
Intense murder.

Marc: Well it seems like this 1st mission is conna be fun Hato
Hato: well "your" 1st mission this is my 15th mission
Marc: true but lets beg to differ seeing as Ive been with you for a few days and were almost at our destination I believe that you can be quiet childish Hato
Hato punches karasu's arm giving enough impact for him to fall on the ground
Marc: hey what was that for
Hato: if anyones childish here its you
the duo continue walking to the Northern area of the region.
as the Duo arrive in a cavern like area it starts to get a little bit chilly and the wind started kicking up
????: Who dares to enter my domain!?
Marc: I assume that you are the man who controls winds?
????: You assumed correctly and I assume to assume that you are assasins that are here for my arrest?
Hato: yes were here to either kill or arrest you. your wanted dead or alive.
????: ah yes now tell me what was the name it said on the flier who is it they wanted to be arrested?
Marc: the man who controls winds
????: well seeing as you 2 are not going to see me again I may as well reveal my name.
A giant wind appears making a mini tornado appear infront of Marc and Hato.
????: my name is Taka the man that controls winds
Taka: I may as well reveal another secret
A shadow figure jumped out form the shadows a purple coloured pokemon with dark red eyes
Taka: meet the pokemon that gives me the power to control said wind. this is Suicune but as you can see its a different colour thats because its a shadow pokemon. Thats right I corrupted suicune like Ho-oh was corrupted years ago.
Hato: Ive heard of 3 people who have the legendary dogs. a man who wears red crimson. a man who is a master of archery. and a man who controls the wind. no wonder you live in the north its got the strongest winds up here
Taka: ah yes it is im surprised a lady such as yourself can identify why I chose this area as my location.
Marc: enough talk. Taka as Assasins it is our duty to kill or arrest those who are wanted on a flier. you are under arrest for the following crimes. intense murder and corruption of pokemon both of which can be justified by...
Marc grabs his sword and pokeball
Marc: DEATH!
Marc threw his pokeball out revealing Fenetre the shiny Beedrill and his sword from his back pointing towards Taka
Taka: heh a newbie I assume that you have reasons for being a assasin but a newbie taking on me just gets on my nerves. 
Taka puts his arm forward sending black wind towards Marc and Fenetre. the wind disapears and a shiny Altaria is infront of Marc and Fenetre with Hato riding on top of it.

To be continued in act 3.

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by FutureCreator on Sun Aug 09, 2015 4:31 pm

Ok so if I'm getting this correctly this is supposed to be cannon, right? Ho-oh isn't a shadow pokemon atleast not as far as I'm concerned, I don't know if you ran this through the council, but no one told me about a shadow ho-oh.

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by CrimsonIgnis on Sun Aug 09, 2015 4:36 pm

FutureCreator wrote:Ok so if I'm getting this correctly this is supposed to be cannon, right? Ho-oh isn't a shadow pokemon atleast not as far as I'm concerned, I don't know if you ran this through the council, but no one told me about a shadow ho-oh.

He hasn't really said anything to the council(as far as I know of). We're waiting for him to be online so we can confront him about this stuff.

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I assumed

Post by Karasugaming on Sun Aug 09, 2015 5:49 pm

Didn't it say in the jelly colloctive original RP that it was a differently coloured ho-oh darker then usual?
If not I apologise because I thought that Ho-oh was a shadow ho-oh in the RP

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:12 pm

It did, but it never said that it was a shadow Pokemon. It was ment to be a shiny Pokemon, but I guess people didn't guess that. Also, the question still stands, is this ment to be canon or non-canon?

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to lama

Post by Karasugaming on Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:31 pm

Ignis has talked to me about it and its canon 
BUT taka is not a permanent character he is just part of the story and most characters in this story will die 
suicune dies in it as well And I did not know I had to not contradict with the Jelly colloctive RP guidlines.

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:33 pm

That was mainly just for if it's a canon story or not. Since yours is, it would've been best to confirm things with us, but I can understand your confusion about it.

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thankyou lama

Post by Karasugaming on Sun Aug 09, 2015 8:36 pm

thankyou lama for clearing this up
but the shadow suicune dies and taka dies anyway the only character that is going to be apart of S2 is Marc with past memories of him and Hato

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Post by LlamaMinister on Sun Aug 09, 2015 8:38 pm

No problem.

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ACT 3: its the end for you, Taka's defeat

Post by Karasugaming on Tue Aug 18, 2015 9:53 pm

Taka: Suicune! Use dark wind now!
Suicune unleashed a black raging wind towards Marc and Hato
Hato: I can't take much more of this Altaria use defog!
Altaria came out of its pokeball flapping its fluffy wings but it wasn't enough to stop the shadow suicunes wind.
Marc: Lance! now while the Suicunes distracted with us! Use X-Scissor!
Beedrill came out of the shadows in its mega form and slashed a X into the side of the shadow Suicune making it die from blood loss
Taka: Suicune no... its not possible shadow pokemon are undefeatable!
as taka said that Marc pointed his long sword at the neck of Taka
Marc: your crimes end here taka.. say hello to Giratina for me
Marc said as he sliced Taka's head off.
Hato: Marc are you feeling okay?
Marc started having a sinister smile on his face but when he heard Hato's voice He snapped out of it
Marc: sorry but the flier did say dead or alive and we are Assasins who either bring our target back dead or alive its more save for them to be dead depending on how dangerous they are.
Hato: true, but now that we have our target lets take his sword to show proof that he has been eliminated
Hato said as the two returned there pokemon and started exiting the mountain area but before Marc left he put his hand on suicune and apologised for its demise.
Hato and Marc both arrived back at the jellyopolis pub and showed the person who put taka's wanted poster up his sword and Hato and Marc both received $1000 as there reward.
Hato: Marc... If you don't have a place to stay... I have a spare room in my apartment... you can stay there if you want
Marc: well Seeing as I don't want to sleep on the streets and I have someone I know now I may as well take you up on your offer.
Hato: Great! Follow me
She said with a tone of glee and a smile on her face
Hato and Marc arrive at Hato's apartment
Hato: well this is it hope you like it
She said as she showed Marc the clean spare room.
Marc: I appreciate your hospitality thankyou hato
Marc said as he put his hand out with $150 in it
Hato: um... I was thinking that you can stay here for free no payment required
Marc: okay then
He said as he put his money back in his pouch
Marc: well I'll see you in the morning Hato G'night
He said as he started slowly closing the door
Hato: G'night! 
she said outloud and then quietly under her breath she said
Hato: Darling

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Act 4: Marc and Hato, Lovers

Post by Karasugaming on Tue Aug 18, 2015 10:07 pm

Marc and Hato started doing more assassination requests together.
5 months have passed and Hato actually asked Marc if He would like to be her girlfriend. Marc replied with a hug and said he felt the same way which made Hato cry. They started acting as a couple around Jelliopolis and then after they got enough money they bought a cottage up in a quiet area in the nearby forest where there was a big garden area in the middle of it. They let there pokemon out and play with each other in the garden area while they relaxed in their cottage. The most recent assassination request that Marc and Hato went on they received a egg that Marc and Hato treated as their child. 2 more months passed and Marc finally built up the courage to propose to Hato which she said yes with a smile and face full of tears. their was a big wedding in Jelliopolis where a'lot of people who were in the Fight of Jelliopolis were there to congratulate the two. a month later after the honeymoon Hato asked Marc if they could have a baby. Marc replied with a smile and a hug and whispered in her ear yes. 2 more months had passed and Marc and Hato decided to do 1 last assassination mission together before there baby was born and they took the egg with them.

This Mission was titled
Wanted: DEAD no other option this person MUST be Killed
Crime: Taking peoples lives of those who worship Arceus. this person claims to worship Arceus yet uses dark types to take the lives of people who worship Arceus.
Reward: $1,00000000

Marc and Hato decided to take that mission seeing as the baby wasn't due for another month.
Too be continued in Act 5

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Act 5: Atlas the Anti-Arceus

Post by Karasugaming on Tue Aug 18, 2015 10:34 pm

Marc and Hato read the flier again and found out that the mission was in the same location as were there 1st mission together was.
Hato: Ah memories our 1st mission together
Marc: True but are you sure your up for this?
Hato: Marc Our child isn't due until next month, also it's our last mission may as well make our pray fun
Hato said as she kissed marc on the lips
Marc: Okay then lets start going
Marc and Hato started there walk towards the mountain area while Hato was riding her Altaria and Marc his Gliscor
Marc: we haven't even gotten a name for our child for when its born do we? seeing as we have time to kill until were there how about we brain storm?
Hato: Sure how about Serene, or Annie?
Marc: na how about we call her Bertha or Penny?
Hato: Oh I got it Cornelia!
She said as she started rubbing her stomach
Marc: I think thats a beautiful name
Marc said as vice moved closer for Marc to rub Hato's stomach as well

The two made it to the mountain area where it started to snow and Marc hopped of  Vice returning him to its pokeball.
Marc: come on Altaria this way
Marc said as he started getting altaria to follow him while it was carrying Hato
????: Keh Keh Keh Zoroark more prey for our God wouldn't you say?
The Zoroark replied with a smile

Marc: well this is where the flier said he should be but I don't see anyone
Hato: maybe he's not here yet
A finger snap echoed throughout the area and torches started lightning up
Marc: WHOSE THERE!
Marc said as he drew out his long sword
????: Keh Keh Keh I thought you were looking for me were you not?
A man withdrew from the shadows
Marc: no... I killed you how are you still alive!
the man strangely looked like Taka
????: no Im not the man you killed. the reason why I look like him is because Im his son.
Marc and hato in shock quickly draw out their weapons
????: my name is Atlas if you must know and I praise our lord and saviour Arceus but.. I probably shouldn't use that routine in front of you two the true god I worship Is Giratina. Im pretty sure you said these words when you killed my father "Say hello to Giratina for me in hell" did you not?
Marc: so what If I did
Atlas: well it appears you took something from me so now im going to take something from you!
Atlas said as he sent out 6 dark type pokemon
Houndoom, Honchkrow, Krookodile, Zoroark, Mightyena and Bisharp
Atlas: you guys know what to do KILL!
Marc: HELP ME OUT GUYS!
Marc said as he threw out 6 of his pokemon
Macaron - Slurpuff
Vice - Gliscor
Glen - Grumpig
Lance - Beedrill
Oreo - Umbreon
Morgiana - Floatzel

Marc: HATO RUN NOW!
Marc yelled out as he blocked a bisharp who was trying to cut his arm off
Hato started flying away when Atlas sent Zoroark to follow her
Marc: NO!
he said after his pokemon defeated 5 of Atlas's pokemon and returned 5 of his keeping lance out.
Marc started running after the zoroark with lance following close behind but suddenly atlas came running towards them hoping to stab Marc but stabbed Lance who protected Marc.
Marc: Lance... no...
He started saying with tears in his eyes
Marc sent out vice to fly quickly after Hato
he caught up and saw the zoroark close behind. Marc commanded Vice to fly down quickly and use sky uppercut on the zoroark
Marc: NOW VICE! 
He said as vice crashed on top of the zoroark obliterating it.
Marc: Hato are you okay
Hato: Im fine but are you okay?
Marc: No he's planning to kill you and our child I want you to get as far away from here as possible!
Hato: but marc
Marc: NOW! he said as he saw Atlas coming this way
Hato's Alataria started flying off but atlas threw a knife directly near its heart causing Hato to start falling off a cliff
Marc: NO!
Marc yelled out as he jumped off the cliff putting Hato in front of himself
the two crashed into a pile of snow
Hato: Marc are you okay?
She started saying in pain from after the shock
Marc: im fine what about you?
Hato. Im.....
She couldn't finish her sentence after she was cut in the back
Marc: HATO!? HATO!? HATO!?
Marc started shouting again and again hoping she wasn't dead
Atlas: you really thought you could get away from me you slippery little bitch!
Marc got up staring down with a shadow covering his face
Atlas: aww did the big strong man lose his wife oh and whats this she was pregnant?
Atlas then grabbed his sword and stabbed her stomach several times
Atlas: oh now he has no family what a shame how does it feel? losing a family? My mothers still alive but she divorced my father after he started experimenting on suicune. but tell me how does it feel to lose your WHOLE family?
Marc got up off his feet and started walking towards Atlas
Atlas: oh? so your going to give up are you coming to pierce my sword through you yourself?
Marc then grabbed Hato's sword walking towards Atlas

To be continued in act 6 the final chapter

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Act 6: Cornelia

Post by Karasugaming on Tue Aug 18, 2015 10:51 pm

Marc started walking towards Atlas with Hato's sword in his hand with tears running down his face
Marc: your a psychopath, A low life murderer and a evil satanic person. And for doing what you did just then. taking not only Lance away from me but my wife and child.
Marc took a deep breath in.
Marc: IM GOING TO END YOU! 
He said as he pierced Atlas through the head with Hato's Rapier stabbing him and slicing him until their was nothing but bones and shreds of clothing
Marc grabbed hato's corpse and returned her Altaria to its pokeball keeping it on him as a memory. Marc made it back to the cottage where he buried Hato's corpse. He then put a tombstone up where it said

Here Lies Hato Yamashi
Married to Marc Yamashi
Born on april 25th 1236 - 1310
death by Atlas a man who praised Giratina who took her life including her unborn child
may she rest in piece.

after he walked away from the tombstone a bright light started shining in his scarf. The egg he brought with him that he forgot about was about to hatch in his scarf. the egg hatched into a black and blue pokemon with bat wings and speakers for ears. It was a shiny Female Noibat.

Marc: This must be a sign from Hato for me to keep living. I'll call this noibat...  Cornelia the name that Our child would of been. 
He said as he had tears going down his face and the Noibat let off a happy smile and screech. Marc hugged it
Marc: Now what am I to do with you... your capable of looking after yourself... how about you look after the cottage for me Altaria? people would think your a big teddy bear and you can look after Cornelia for me when Im away how about that?
the Golden Altaria nodded and gave Marc a comforting hug while he was hugging Cornelia.

Marc Continues his career as a Assassin for higher and will take requests or make his own requests depending on the person. He stares at the stars with Cornelia on his shoulder and Altaria standing next to them saying hello to Hato who is now living in Nervana with Arceus. Marc still regrets the decision of going on that quest with Hato and wished that he could of changed her mind.

The sad story of Marc before he joined the Jelly colloctie: End.

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by FutureCreator on Wed Aug 19, 2015 3:12 am

Ok Gamer, firstly there are some really bad timeline issues. This whole stroy should take place within a year, and since its right after the battle of Jellopolis it makes it take about 16 months. Also a minor gripe, you don't exactly know when kids will be born, so they can't be "due tomorrow", especially in the medival days. The shadow pokemon thing was completly pointless, since 5 lines later you kiled it off, in the most anti-climactic way possible making it seem patheticly weak. Overall the story has some serious pacing issues, especially in the battle sections. And another thing, either Hato is a skilled assassin, or a damsel in distress, she can not be both or switch them at will. Thats just how characters are written.

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by LlamaMinister on Wed Aug 19, 2015 3:52 am

13gamer2000 wrote:After the events of the attack on jelliopolis a 15 year old boy woke up underneath a tree
Also, you...uh, made a 15 year old get married and almost have a kid.

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who said he was 15

Post by Karasugaming on Wed Aug 19, 2015 4:43 am

who said he was 15 (if it did I was ment to change that)

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Re: The sad story of marc before he became part of the Jelly colloctive RP

Post by FutureCreator on Wed Aug 19, 2015 4:46 am

You in the first sentance, also Hato is 64 appearantly

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Post by LlamaMinister on Wed Aug 19, 2015 4:49 am

13gamer2000 wrote:who said he was 15 (if it did I was ment to change that)

Yeah, it was right in the first sentence. That's why I quoted it.

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