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Post by Pixel Profligate Wed Jun 10, 2015 12:35 pm

LM's Gym Leader Project TfGoBv2
So, I got bored, and then I made some Gym Leaders. I'll update this over time.
Please feel free to critique these as much as you can. I would appreciate it.
UPDATE: Fixed Grayson and most of the flaws. Please point out any you see still.


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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri Jun 12, 2015 1:45 am

I just realized it is his arm and hand with the Pokeball that is weird. Curse you brain!
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Post by CrimsonIgnis Fri Jun 12, 2015 3:54 am

Nice sprites. I've critiqued the first four. Now as for the new one, like you said his right hand looks weird. Also the angle of the shield is off either that or the arm holding it. Another thing the right thigh guard is bigger than the left thigh guard. Last thing that I see is that the legs seem a bit long compared to the torso. Other than all that this is nicely done. Keep up the good work!
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Post by Zenox-rmp Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:45 am

Looks nice. Ignis said all the things I would've said.
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri Jun 12, 2015 9:17 am

Yeah, now that I've had sleep, I can see all the problems with it. I'll get to fixing those this morning. Thanks for the feedback. Any suggestions for the next gym leader type?

Moral of the story: Don't try to sprite with only 4 hours of sleep under your belt after you've been awake for 21 hours and immediately after 6 hours of physical exercise, or your brain misses things.
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Post by Yria/Mara LB Fri Jun 12, 2015 12:22 pm

Do fairy,
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri Jun 12, 2015 1:36 pm

Updated again. I fixed most of Grayson.
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Post by Zenox-rmp Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:05 pm

Yria/Mara LB wrote:Do fairy,

No.
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:07 pm

Yria/Mara LB wrote:Do fairy,
I like the fairy type, so sure.
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Post by Zell Justice Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:11 pm

Good Job LM , The Steel-Type who was my suggestion , Looks like I thought It would be
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:12 pm

Cool! I'm glad you like 'em Smile
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Post by verys Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:01 pm

Ice type maybe? The only flaws I really see are the hands that are holding pokeballs. They just don't look right...
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Post by Pixel Profligate Sat Jun 13, 2015 6:25 am

I'm saving Ice for the Elite Four (because I always have Ice as an Elite Four type.)

Thanks for your input, but I am having a hard time seeing the "weird" of the hands. Most of the hands are taken directly from official Sprites, too.
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