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Post by Yria/Mara LB Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:32 am

(I will update this wel every day I think.)
When you dont really like watching trough the comments to read the story. Here it is in his full glory!
first part:

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Post by Yria/Mara LB Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:32 am

Second one?:


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Post by Yria/Mara LB Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:33 am

Final part.:


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Post by Yria/Mara LB Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:10 pm

Another one:


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Post by TriShade Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:26 pm

This is a great idea! One recommendation though, do you think you could edit this so that it's grammatically correct all the way through? Or perhaps that should wait until it's finished?
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Post by Pixel Profligate Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:35 pm

I vote for grammatical correctness tongue
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Post by Kitten Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:59 pm

I'd say grammatical correctness, but maybe after the RP is done so we can still read off of the original on here instead of going through multiple pages. Unless this is a forever ongoing thing (which I'm not opposed to cause I think this RP is hilarious xD). But yeah, afterwards. Kinda like a novel, you gotta write the first draft before you edit, y'know what I'm saying?
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Post by TriShade Fri Apr 17, 2015 11:01 pm

Makes sense. This RP's so good I kind of want to start another so that this forum has twice the RP goodness. Unfortunately that might get a bit confusing and I can't come up with an idea anyways so I'll hold off for now.
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Post by Karasugaming Sat Apr 18, 2015 2:02 am

How bout we work together on making a sprite comic for the RP i could place the positioning of sprites someone could create the scenery and someone else could type the words into word bubbles.
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Post by Kitten Sat Apr 18, 2015 2:23 am

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This is a cute idea! Would we be using overworlds or trainer sprites (I'm gonna assume overworlds, like Silver's comic maybe)? I can try to finish the basic animations for my Kitten sprite this weekend or so and just add more as we go along. I gotta finish the contest entry and some other artwork I owe first tho and then I can do them ouo;; oh, and homework, too -wheeze-
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Post by Karasugaming Sat Apr 18, 2015 2:59 am

you assumed correctly that we would be using gen4 Overworld sprites like in silvers comic (im terrible at making gen4 sprites and would appreciate it if someone made karasu gen4 sprites for me) and we would make each page Weekly so we would have a time frame and this would be a big success seeing as how the story is going so far. also for events in the story such as pokemon battles we would use PMD sprites (pokemon mystery dungeon) and we might have to make some overworld sprites for pokemon in the story that don't have them yet (such as Froakie)
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Post by Istas Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:23 am

funny you should say sprite comic like silvers...
I'm actually making my own at the moment called the Eskeia league based on the silver league comic's style
check it out here: http://pokemontheeskiealeague.smackjeeves.com/comics/2116870/black-scyther-needs-your-help/

if you want you can send your gen 4 OW's in

and as this proves i can make a sprite comic, if somewhat mediocre but i don't have a team to support me Razz
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Post by Yria/Mara LB Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:27 am

I wil try to fix the grammar. If its wrong srry I live in the Netherlands and I'm probally one of the younger people at te forums. So my english is like what did you say?
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Post by Istas Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:29 am

Yria/Mara LB wrote:I wil try to fix the grammar. If its wrong srry I live in the Netherlands and I'm probally one of the younger people at te forums. So my english is like what did you say?

they pretty much said it wasn't grammatically correct from what i can tell, when i get words wrong i blame it on my keyboard for screwing up Razz
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Post by Yria/Mara LB Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:34 am

Istas wrote:
Yria/Mara LB wrote:I wil try to fix the grammar. If its wrong srry I live in the Netherlands and I'm probally one of the younger people at te forums. So my english is like what did you say?

they pretty much said it wasn't grammatically correct from what i can tell, when i get words wrong i blame it on my keyboard for screwing up Razz

I will try to fix it if theres something wrong. I already did a bit but with my perfectonistic things I'm checking the same thing like 50 times so hopefully its gonna be right one day Razz.
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Post by Karasugaming Sat Apr 18, 2015 6:00 am

im terrible at making them i made like 4 of them and they were bad like really bad X,( (better at making gen 3 sprites)
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Post by TriShade Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:54 am

Yria/Mara LB wrote:
Istas wrote:
Yria/Mara LB wrote:I wil try to fix the grammar. If its wrong srry I live in the Netherlands and I'm probally one of the younger people at te forums. So my english is like what did you say?

they pretty much said it wasn't grammatically correct from what i can tell, when i get words wrong i blame it on my keyboard for screwing up Razz

I will try to fix it if theres something wrong. I already did a bit but with my perfectonistic things I'm checking the same thing like 50 times so hopefully its gonna be right one day Razz.
Don't worry! When I said there were errors, I didn't just mean you. I think by now, everyone has made a few mistakes already Razz .
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Post by Yria/Mara LB Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:01 am

TriShade wrote:
Yria/Mara LB wrote:
Istas wrote:
Yria/Mara LB wrote:I wil try to fix the grammar. If its wrong srry I live in the Netherlands and I'm probally one of the younger people at te forums. So my english is like what did you say?

they pretty much said it wasn't grammatically correct from what i can tell, when i get words wrong i blame it on my keyboard for screwing up Razz

I will try to fix it if theres something wrong. I already did a bit but with my perfectonistic things I'm checking the same thing like 50 times so hopefully its gonna be right one day Razz.
Don't worry! When I said there were errors, I didn't just mean you. I think by now, everyone has made a few mistakes already Razz .

I know it isnt only me. I have seen alot of grammar errors and stuff. In the whole story I will try to fix it. Really I'm not worrying TriShade Very Happy.
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