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Post by SpartanAce on Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:33 pm

Hey guys, wanted to show you some sprites I have made for a Pokemon fan game my friend and I are making called Pokemon Dark Jade!


The game is set in the Mar-Ehy region which resembles the real world Louisiana.

Here's the Gym Leaders...


I'm going to hopefully keep you guys updated on the sprite art I'm making for the game. I also hope to show you the Fakemon my friend is designing soon.
Hope you guys like the sprites!

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Re: Custom Gym Leader Sprites + Work in progress fan game

Post by Istas on Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:48 pm

It's an interesting mix, not to sound harsh but they're all ok and grass is the one I don't spot any real flaws with, first I'd suggest going through and adding noses to each of the sprites that don't already have them. Second of all I would suggest redoing any arms that have spaghetti syndrome length and I would suggest adding shading where it looks flat. Finally It would be better if you re-did the water gym leaders body, it seem misshapen and as if different body parts were used without subtlety and the head is disconnected from the body. I honestly hope you didn't take that harshly it is just an honest opinion and constructive criticism of how the sprites could be improved. Regardless good job on the grass gym leader Smile

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Post by Istas on Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:03 pm

Also the ground gym leader's dress is a bad colour to contrast against her skin

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Post by SpartanAce on Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:05 pm

No need to worry about the criticism, I was hoping to see some so I can improve. Thank you! Also which sprites have spaghetti syndrome arms? All or just a few?

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Post by Istas on Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:07 pm

Ok, sometimes my messages can be seen in the wrong way so I clarify just incase Razz

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Post by BetaX on Fri Apr 10, 2015 10:02 pm

This looks great! Mind if I do the mugshot for the gym leaders?
If you know me from the Pixel art in review. Cool

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Post by SpartanAce on Fri Apr 10, 2015 10:45 pm

Beta that would be an honor! Please do! I'm glad you like them so much.

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Re: Custom Gym Leader Sprites + Work in progress fan game

Post by BetaX on Fri Apr 10, 2015 11:01 pm

SpartanAce wrote:Beta that would be an honor! Please do! I'm glad you like them so much.
one question. is the first gym leader a female? I feel stupid to asked

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Post by SpartanAce on Fri Apr 10, 2015 11:47 pm

Oh, no need to feel bad. She's female and is actually going to be the protagonists sister.

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Re: Custom Gym Leader Sprites + Work in progress fan game

Post by Yria/Mara LB on Sat Apr 11, 2015 6:08 am

How to improve?
-The Normal and Fire leaders need a nose to make it less Voldemord-y.
-And I dont really see a spaggeti arm syndrome. Maybe on the Ground type gym leader but the arms are ment to be smaller so not really. And to improve the Ground leader maybe get the color of the dress a bit different. It matches a bit to well with the skin color.
-And as Istas already sed redo the body of the water gym leader and on one foot theres a bit double pixelation. On the other foot on one pixel on the outline you used a different color maybe use that to help the double pixelation?
-And with the dark type gym leader shoes? You dont see them well if they are there. Maybe put outlines if they are? Or is it ment to have like no feet? idk the rest looks really great though.

But overall
The rest looks really nice and I like the design off all of them. The grass one is the best in my opninion.
Keep up the great work Very Happy

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Post by Istas on Sat Apr 11, 2015 8:45 am

with the spaghetti arms, I was referring to how some came around in stringy kind of ways and didnt really have elbows to look like proper arms, we added too much jelly this time Razz

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Re: Custom Gym Leader Sprites + Work in progress fan game

Post by TriShade on Sat Apr 11, 2015 10:32 am

Jelly Very Happy !

The sprites are really nice and I especially like the character designs Very Happy ! I have a few things to add to everyone else's suggestions. On the normal trainer, once the blue pants end on her legs, is that supposed to be skin or different coloured pants? If it's skin, I'd recommend reducing the width a bit. The poison one's head seems a bit too small and the connection to the shoulders seems off. And finally, the dark one's arm throwing the pokeball seems to curl...? Anyways these sprites are really good, can't wait to see more of your work Very Happy !

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Post by SpartanAce on Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:06 pm

Thank you everyone for the helpful feedback! I appreciate it a lot Smile I will be fixing these up soon from your feedback.

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Post by Yria/Mara LB on Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:19 pm

No problem.
If the game is finished coud you give a download link or something Razz.

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Post by SpartanAce on Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:35 pm

I will, but I haven't even started programming it so it might be a little while xD

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Post by Yria/Mara LB on Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:41 pm

No problem I'm patient XD.

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Re: Custom Gym Leader Sprites + Work in progress fan game

Post by Zenox-rmp on Sat Apr 11, 2015 2:10 pm

Is the game placed in a new region?

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Post by SpartanAce on Sat Apr 11, 2015 2:29 pm

Yup! It's called the Mar-Ehy region and it's based of the state of Louisiana. (Swamp)

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Post by Zenox-rmp on Sat Apr 11, 2015 4:16 pm

Oh cool! Can't wait to play this game bounce

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Post by Zenox-rmp on Sat Apr 11, 2015 4:26 pm

Oh, and maybe one of us can help to if you need it.

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Post by SpartanAce on Sat Apr 11, 2015 5:15 pm

Yeah I will post something if I need any help or anything with spriting and stuff!

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Post by Zenox-rmp on Sat Apr 11, 2015 5:20 pm

Okay Very Happy

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Gym Leader Mugshot. (Work in Progress.)

Post by BetaX on Sun Apr 12, 2015 12:53 am


This is a WIP. It'll be updated in this reply, so keep an eye on this reply.
Complete:
The Normal Type Gym Leader
The Fire Type Gym Leader
Incomplete:
The Ghost Type Gym Leader
The Poison Type Gym Leader
The Grass Type Gym Leader
The Ground Type Gym Leader
The Dark Type Gym Leader
The Water Type Gym Leader
Stay Tuned...

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Post by SpartanAce on Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:02 am

These are amazing Beta! (As per usual) Thank you so much. Could I use these in the game? I'm definitely going to give credit. Razz

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Post by BetaX on Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:39 am

SpartanAce wrote:These are amazing Beta! (As per usual) Thank you so much. Could I use these in the game? I'm definitely going to give credit. Razz
This is the reason why I made the mugshots. So you could use this in the game. Razz you silly Razz

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