Legend Of Nirvan
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Legend Of Nirvan
Okay Guys this is my Sprite of my Project call Legend Of Nirvan. Which Trainer do you like? Which starters do you pick? How's the Evolution of Dugtrio, Quadraquake? *note this is not a mega evolution* How the Villains and the Leader of it? Stories about the Organization's Plans will be announce later on. Hope who guys like it!
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RE: legend of Nirvana
these sprites are amazing but the male protagonist kinda looks like a girl maybe if you fix the hair up a bit. also the leaders of the evil organization are all wearing helmets but is the true leader a actual rayquaza? if not wouldn't you want to make a head appear in like the mouth of rayquaza or something? but still there excellent sprites and i would start with the fire/ground type
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
@13gamer2000
Read what it said under True Leader, Ryuga the Rayquaza this answer your question.
The main male Trainer's hair suppose to be like a girl because of my design and if you don't like it? Well... I'm sorry.
Read what it said under True Leader, Ryuga the Rayquaza this answer your question.
The main male Trainer's hair suppose to be like a girl because of my design and if you don't like it? Well... I'm sorry.
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
@deadlyduel
LoL! You just made my day. It wouldn't Ryuga but rather than Mesogog.
I'm going to fix her when I get to it.
LoL! You just made my day. It wouldn't Ryuga but rather than Mesogog.
I'm going to fix her when I get to it.
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
So Ryuga's a girl? I thought Rayquayza was genderless.
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
@Joasama
What?! No!
Ryuga is genderless but he should be a guy
What?! No!
Ryuga is genderless but he should be a guy
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
pretty sweet. Just a few things:
Shading on the girl's leg is too intense, makes it look like her leg is far, far behind where it actually is. Conversely, there needs to be more shading on the boy's left arm.
the starters are great but look a bit too complex when compared to classic starter designs. They look more like legendary or pseudolegendary designs.
Herane has the same problem as the boy, that left arm should be shaded or have a dark outline. Goken is pretty much perfect just try and vary the line, with a dark yellow or brown this time.
Falasia has an awesome design but the sprite is very, very stiff. THe dress needs more fabric folds and the hair and arms are in a stiff position. the pose is possible, but not very naturally comfortable. the hair would need a lot of hairspray to stay like that, so unless she has that the hair needs modifying. lavarne is amazing, just maybe a slightly darker outline on the hair.
psyno needs no improvements at all.
Cavelry is perfect except for the face, which is pretty off and unnatural. try rounding it some.
Kalvery is great though! Only thing that looks off is that one eye which are very hard to do so I don't need you to fix it.
Giratina and Arceus are great but you need more practice on faces that are profile or 3/4 like Calvery, palkia, dialga (Which I'm assuming it's supposed to be 3/4 because of the shading, but the face is in profile if you take the shading off.)
Quadrake rocks, end of story.
Great job at allthis <3
Shading on the girl's leg is too intense, makes it look like her leg is far, far behind where it actually is. Conversely, there needs to be more shading on the boy's left arm.
the starters are great but look a bit too complex when compared to classic starter designs. They look more like legendary or pseudolegendary designs.
Herane has the same problem as the boy, that left arm should be shaded or have a dark outline. Goken is pretty much perfect just try and vary the line, with a dark yellow or brown this time.
Falasia has an awesome design but the sprite is very, very stiff. THe dress needs more fabric folds and the hair and arms are in a stiff position. the pose is possible, but not very naturally comfortable. the hair would need a lot of hairspray to stay like that, so unless she has that the hair needs modifying. lavarne is amazing, just maybe a slightly darker outline on the hair.
psyno needs no improvements at all.
Cavelry is perfect except for the face, which is pretty off and unnatural. try rounding it some.
Kalvery is great though! Only thing that looks off is that one eye which are very hard to do so I don't need you to fix it.
Giratina and Arceus are great but you need more practice on faces that are profile or 3/4 like Calvery, palkia, dialga (Which I'm assuming it's supposed to be 3/4 because of the shading, but the face is in profile if you take the shading off.)
Quadrake rocks, end of story.
Great job at allthis <3
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
some quick fixes
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amezing
Wow Amezing fixes aldin
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
Thanks for fixing that up for me! But there's some problem about what you said and the edited version of it.
I love how you shaded Falasia about the hair, that's my design for her just like Caitlin from Pokemon B and W or 2.
Harene, Larvene, the male and female protagonist look pretty decent to me so there's no need for fixing on that. I just happened to prefered my coloring.
I don't think the design for the final starer looks complex to me. Look at gen 5 for an example. Is it the coloring for them? Don't worry about that. I fixed the coloring for the starters.
Overall thanks for the fixing and thanks for the criticism.
I'm planning for remaking the admins since this is before I got the hang of the scratch build mugshots. Right after the episode got reviewed for my sprites.
I love how you shaded Falasia about the hair, that's my design for her just like Caitlin from Pokemon B and W or 2.
Harene, Larvene, the male and female protagonist look pretty decent to me so there's no need for fixing on that. I just happened to prefered my coloring.
I don't think the design for the final starer looks complex to me. Look at gen 5 for an example. Is it the coloring for them? Don't worry about that. I fixed the coloring for the starters.
Overall thanks for the fixing and thanks for the criticism.
I'm planning for remaking the admins since this is before I got the hang of the scratch build mugshots. Right after the episode got reviewed for my sprites.
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
alright ^^
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
Sorry for a double post but
@gamer- you said you have a mega stone... what Pokemon do you mega evolve?
@BetaX- do any of your gym leaders mega evolve? For example my ground type lady has a mega Flygon (In Erita it's real) and the Fire type gym leader has a mega Blazikin. Haven't decided on the others, but maybe a mega Huntail/Gorebyss for the water type lady in a rematch? (Wow so much gen 3)
I could so see Kalvyrie or whatever her name is with a mega Togekiss.
@gamer- you said you have a mega stone... what Pokemon do you mega evolve?
@BetaX- do any of your gym leaders mega evolve? For example my ground type lady has a mega Flygon (In Erita it's real) and the Fire type gym leader has a mega Blazikin. Haven't decided on the others, but maybe a mega Huntail/Gorebyss for the water type lady in a rematch? (Wow so much gen 3)
I could so see Kalvyrie or whatever her name is with a mega Togekiss.
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what i mega evolve
i mega evolve gallade :I
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
Did you make that sprite cuz it's really good except for the eye, which looks too big and cartoonish.
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nuh
no didnt make the mega sprite i cant make pokes its a image i found on google that i thought looked cool :I
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
Man, this are really good, although the names on the FE Starters are kinda off for me. Other than that, keep up the good work - and good fixes, Aldin.
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Re: Legend Of Nirvan
lol these finally got reviewed
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i know
i know betax even made a trainer sprite for ryuga the rayquaza it was amezing!
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