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Post by Ryouzen on Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:02 pm

So I'm trying to make my first competitive pokemon team and could definitely use all the advice I could get. Especially as I want to use this in the tournament that will be in october (if memory serves). No doubt there are some things I could work on and improve but thats why this'll be here haha! So feel free to give me everything ya got. Good points, bad points, and everything in between. Gotta learn somehow am I right?

These are arranged in no particular order btw.

Pokemon: Dusclops
Item: Eviolite
Ability: Pressure
Nature: Brave
EV spread: 252 Def, 252 Sp Def, 4 Atk
Moves: Rest, Payback, Wil-o-wisp, Night Shade

Pokemon: Gengar
Item: Focus Sash
Ability: Levitate
Nature: Modest
EV spread: 252 Sp. Atk, 252. Spd, 4 Sp Def
Moves: Toxic, Shadow ball, Hex, Sludge Wave

Pokemon: Golurk
Item: Life Orb
Ability: Iron Fist
Nature: Brave
EV spread: 252 Atk, 128 Def, 128 Sp Def
Moves: Hammer Arm, Iron Defense, Drain Punch, Earthquake

Pokemon: Chandelure
Item: Wise Glasses
Ability: Flash Fire
Nature: Modest
EV spread: 252 Sp Atk, 252 HP, 4 Spd
Moves: Energy Ball, Hex, Heat Wave, Calm mind

Pokemon: Driftblim
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Aftermath
Nature: Bold
EV spread: 252 HP, 128 Def, 128 Sp Def
Moves: Baton Pass, Stockpile, Hex, Defog

Pokemon: Banette
Item: Banettite
Ability: Cursed Body (Prankster when mega)
Nature: Adamant
EV spread: 252 HP, 252 Atk, 4 Spd
Moves: Thunder wave, Shadow Claw, Gunk Shot, Sucker punch
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Re: Team critique

Post by LlamaMinister on Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:36 pm

I'd suggest Pain Split on Dusclops instead of Rest.

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Post by Ryouzen on Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:53 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:I'd suggest Pain Split on Dusclops instead of Rest.

I did not see that at first on him...That is a good idea to be considered. I appreciate ya pointing that out.
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Post by LlamaMinister on Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:57 pm

It's been what I use on mine, figured I'd suggest it ^u^

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Post by Ryouzen on Thu Sep 29, 2016 7:01 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:It's been what I use on mine, figured I'd suggest it ^u^

If you don't mind my asking when would you recommend using it? I've not used Pain Split before but i do have a general idea for it just thought i'd ask though given you've used it XD
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Post by LlamaMinister on Thu Sep 29, 2016 7:02 pm

Typically I run Toxic, Protect, and Pain Split all together, so mine would work differently, but I usually use it just to be a mild annoyance when I'm around half health.

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Post by Ryouzen on Thu Sep 29, 2016 8:11 pm

LlamaMinister wrote:Typically I run Toxic, Protect, and Pain Split all together, so mine would work differently, but I usually use it just to be a mild annoyance when I'm around half health.

Gotcha, i'll be sure to keep that in mind ^^
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Post by LlamaMinister on Thu Sep 29, 2016 8:23 pm

Best of luck to ya ^u^

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